A Win-Win

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Alouette

Created by Jan Turner, the form consists of any number of stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following rhyme scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b...Syllable count: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7

I do not fear death or grieve my last breath. I'll leave this physical realm, to what, I don't know but I'm psyched to go, the feeling should overwhelm. Relinquishing life for an afterlife curiosity numbs fear though life bonds sever. My soul's forever and faith helps me persevere. To find there's a God that isn't a fraud would be all I could hope for, if heaven is true then God's love is too and thus, my spirit shall soar. If there's naught but sleep there's no need to weep. I'll blink out, finally free and never feel pain or anguish again; it seems a win-win to me. (Alouette) 12/4/2018

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Anna Hopper

Date: 12/8/2018 8:45:00 AM

Simply beautiful!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Anna, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2018 12:42:00 AM

Emile, Emile, Emile, it does not matter what form you tackle, and thank you for not only tackling them, but for sharing them with the rest of us. You are the MASTER of whatever form you tackle, this is a "win-win" for not only you, but for the reader also, especially this reader. Thank you my friend! Blessings to you!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/5/2018 7:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren, you are my most supportive fan my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/4/2018 2:24:00 PM

I LOVE your poem, Emile. Superbly penned.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/5/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.