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A Wile and Away

Now, I won’t say I love you no more
-not like I could with a straight face before
I’ve already reached your rotten core
To those spaces no one cares to explore

Benefits far too lost to reap
Lie upon lie you add to your heap
Like a limbless horse, like a worthless creep 
Them disasters don’t make a peep

No they show in your every strive
In every worm you deprive
You the baked potato—I’m the chive
The fallen bit—the stricken thrive

I ain’t so peach n’ cream no more,
I’ve a wile and a way to the floor
I’ve kept all your ashes in store
And your whinin’ is making me sore

Yeah in that hellhole, delving deep
I find your wayside fib too steep
Downward I’ll plummet—you’ll weep
As the Lord I pray my soul to keep

Your dirty heart, it’s like a pitfall dive
Down a fire of pity and false drive
Aching to pull those ghouls into your lie
Till they bury themselves alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/26/2017 6:39:00 PM
There is a robust rhythm to your rage in this poem Laura, yet your heart seems lost, your tears reluctant with love...J.A.B.
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:47:00 PM
Your "dirty heart"... unique, descriptive! GREAT! Love, Jack xxx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/22/2017 12:08:00 AM
Jack!!! So happy to see you on my page...:) thanks..<3~Laura
Date: 1/18/2017 2:49:00 AM
Vitriol delivered on a hot stiletto, ...nice rhyme throughout....2nd line 2nd Stanza, you got a stray " up " that needs removing....x
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/22/2017 12:08:00 AM
Thank you! :] <3~Laura

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