A Wild Fantasy

If I were Death, I’d hide my face From the person who rang my bell I’d make him find me through a maze To test if it’s heaven or hell That person’s right place to be A look in his life and I can tell The person who’s just come to me He’d leave every single thing behind There’s a new afterlife for him to see Hell is hell you keep in mind Every act reversed with you this time That’s how justice you will find But if it’s heaven, winds will chime You’ll be lucky, you’ll be fine Bliss and love from time to time I will get what’s rightfully mine The decision to judge your after life No turning back, no changes now Your fate, your actions will derive now my hands shiver my love is here Will I act dutifully??? --- for "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser Poetry Contest" by Richard Lamoureux
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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Apoorva, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Now! This is poetry. Lovely read.
Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 11:25 PM
A fine presentation. Very well written.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 4:32 PM
This is very different/ I like the unique message. The questionku was quite interesting!!
Martin Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:32 PM
This is great. Your writing style is so fresh and unique, I don't think I can compare it to anything I've read before. Powerful stuff, keep it up, yes
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Your Poem is very good even though you had trouble with the forms. Terzanelle is particularly difficult. I do appreciate that you entered my contest. I enjoyed reading your poem again.
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM
A very imaginative write. Good luck in the contest. Warm S,lies, Connie
Horsman Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 2:28 PM
this is a wonderful poem, and entry for the contest...
Brahma Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 4:33 AM
good rhyming romantic poetry
A  Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Oh my Apoorva, i like the way you think. i am with you if I was death. i would not let no one search for me. I would truly hide somewhere no one new existed. a terrific poem. gives me an idea. adding this to my faves. *LUV~SKAT
Liwayway Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 1:50 AM
very awesome poem my friend Apoorva...Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year!! Hugs, Maria :)
Horne Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 2:16 PM
thought provoking write, Apoorva. Happy New Year to you – I’ve been away from Soup for a long time too (my wife recently left me for someone else).
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 2:18 PM
I enjoyed this poem, and I am happy to see y ou here and showing us your latest contest entry. Good luck, Apoorva. The questionku aptly complements the poem.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 10:31 AM
You captured my attention with the first line. Good luck in the contest. This is a very good poem.
Kendrick Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Great one for Richard's contest..Reads like winning material for me..Being the person that is cloaked in black carrying the sickle would not be a fun job..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Goff Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Imaginative, original, nice, Apoorva, jimbo
Williams Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Apoorva this is very good , thanks for your comment and have a happy and peaceful New Year...David
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