A Wild Fantasy

If I were Death, I’d hide my face From the person who rang my bell I’d make him find me through a maze To test if it’s heaven or hell That person’s right place to be A look in his life and I can tell The person who’s just come to me He’d leave every single thing behind There’s a new afterlife for him to see Hell is hell you keep in mind Every act reversed with you this time That’s how justice you will find But if it’s heaven, winds will chime You’ll be lucky, you’ll be fine Bliss and love from time to time I will get what’s rightfully mine The decision to judge your after life No turning back, no changes now Your fate, your actions will derive now my hands shiver my love is here Will I act dutifully??? --- for "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser Poetry Contest" by Richard Lamoureux

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/26/2015 6:11:00 PM
Apoorva, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/21/2013 11:42:00 AM
Now! This is poetry. Lovely read.
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Date: 3/15/2013 11:25:00 PM
A fine presentation. Very well written.
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:32:00 PM
This is very different/ I like the unique message. The questionku was quite interesting!!
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:32:00 PM
This is great. Your writing style is so fresh and unique, I don't think I can compare it to anything I've read before. Powerful stuff, keep it up, yes
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Date: 2/7/2013 3:27:00 PM
Your Poem is very good even though you had trouble with the forms. Terzanelle is particularly difficult. I do appreciate that you entered my contest. I enjoyed reading your poem again.
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
A very imaginative write. Good luck in the contest. Warm S,lies, Connie
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Date: 1/5/2013 2:28:00 PM
this is a wonderful poem, and entry for the contest...
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Date: 1/3/2013 4:33:00 AM
good rhyming romantic poetry
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:34:00 PM
Oh my Apoorva, i like the way you think. i am with you if I was death. i would not let no one search for me. I would truly hide somewhere no one new existed. a terrific poem. gives me an idea. adding this to my faves. *LUV~SKAT
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Date: 1/2/2013 1:50:00 AM
very awesome poem my friend Apoorva...Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year!! Hugs, Maria :)
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Date: 1/1/2013 2:16:00 PM
thought provoking write, Apoorva. Happy New Year to you – I’ve been away from Soup for a long time too (my wife recently left me for someone else).
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:18:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem, and I am happy to see y ou here and showing us your latest contest entry. Good luck, Apoorva. The questionku aptly complements the poem.
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Date: 12/31/2012 10:31:00 AM
You captured my attention with the first line. Good luck in the contest. This is a very good poem.
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Date: 12/31/2012 9:15:00 AM
Great one for Richard's contest..Reads like winning material for me..Being the person that is cloaked in black carrying the sickle would not be a fun job..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 12/31/2012 9:02:00 AM
Imaginative, original, nice, Apoorva, jimbo
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Date: 12/31/2012 7:04:00 AM
Apoorva this is very good , thanks for your comment and have a happy and peaceful New Year...David
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