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A wicked Twist Hansel And Gretel

The cupboards were bare. The stepmother said, “There’s not enough. Leave them instead.” Into the woods with crusts of bread, they were left to starve or end up dead. The world was cruel, the fire cold. But children learn to grow up bold. The witch was hunger in disguise. They saw the truth behind her eyes. They lit the fire. They found a way. Two kids came back— but not the same.

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Date: 6/22/2025 12:27:00 PM
Hello Jeanine, They came back, not the same! oh that is Eerie! Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2025 9:59:00 AM
Hello Jeamine You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 7/7/2025 10:06:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/29/2025 9:00:00 AM
Eerie but good alter Hansel and Gretel. They grow up fast.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 6/5/2025 5:54:00 PM
Thank you. Indeed they do.

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