A Whisper of Wind

What more than a whisper of wind
   can we demand on a starry night
With strains of violins in the background
   and a velvet-gloved waiter 
                          ~ to take our order
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Gorgeous imagery Gershon.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Ooh…beautiful imagery, my friend!
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Ah, sounds like a heavenly evening of delicious, champagne-bubbled romance, Gershon.. My kind of night! Simply splendid, scrumptious and elegant poetry, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:13 PM
'Scrumptious poetry?' -- Hmmm... 'champagne-bubbled romance' --- I see --- that my poetry's become as mediocre as me. lol. Thanks, Susan. :)
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 6:39 PM
A beautiful verse, Gershon. I watched "The Last Days," this evening, the Steven Spielberg production chronicling the story of five Hungarians who survived the death camps. I recommend it, but I shall never be the same having seen it! Something of it resonated through your poem.
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September 3, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Gershon, as I was watching I was also wondering how some fools and morons could deny the holocaust. Yes, fools and morons...and if they are reading this...that is precisely what I think about them!!!
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 6:58 PM
I have seen 'The Last Days' myself recently, and I was moved beyond words. I too will never be the same as I was before I watched it. Thank you for letting me know this and for all of your support, Milt. To Life! ~ Gershon
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