John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

A Whimsical Fantasy

dreaming in clouds as the night time unfolds
sliding down rainbows and looking for gold
searching the dark for a lover to hold
keeping you warm on a night that’s so cold

under the stars watching lunar eclipse
with your sweet lover on make believe ships
lost in the clouds on your fantasy trips
butterfly kisses so soft on your lips

embraces that take you to faraway lands
strolling bare footed on pearly white sands
feeling caresses with gentle soft hands
aching for passion your body demands

alone with these feelings my thoughts are confined
being alone now my will has resigned
whispers from breezes that come from behind
fantasies echoing deep in my mind


October 14, 2018

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Line Gauthier October 22, 2018 at 4:57 PM Lovely, John. Congrats on your well deserved top win. John Gondolf October 22, 2018 at 5:05 PM Thank you so much, Line.

Gregory Richard Barden October 18, 2018 at 7:11 PM Nicely done, John - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-) John Gondolf October 18, 2018 at 8:41 PM Thanks, Greg, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole October 18, 2018 at 2:06 PM It is amazing, because in dreams- or a fantasy, anything is possible. :) So, with that being said. This Fantasy has become real. (Just imagine) Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy John Gondolf October 18, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. I have many fantasies, many of which I will keep to myself, and my imagination is vivid. :) John

CayCay Godwin October 18, 2018 at 11:06 AM THIS IS GOING INTO MY FAVS! Where to begin? Until the last stanza, I actually wanted to live inside your imagery, then I was hit with reality which is darn realistic. This is profound and I swear I actually heard the sweet ache of musical notes accompany my read. Love it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay John Gondolf October 18, 2018 at 11:27 AM Thank you for this wonderful comment and the fav, CayCay, I'm glad you liked it. Now you know what goes on inside my head, problem is, it's only a fantasy. And sorry I brought you back to reality dear friend. John

Ralph Sergi October 16, 2018 at 7:15 PM You created a beautiful beach scene of love, John!! MY COMPLIMENTS! John Gondolf October 16, 2018 at 7:23 PM Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2018 at 5:34 PM this is beautifuly lyrical John. Romantic and well metered! I love it. John Gondolf October 16, 2018 at 7:10 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Constance La France October 15, 2018 at 6:49 PM John, you have penned a lovely rhyming poem, I just love your whimsical write ~ John Gondolf October 15, 2018 at 7:40 PM Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate that. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole October 14, 2018 at 3:41 PM :) I like the thought of butterfly kisses. It is soooo playful and romantic. Who knows John, perhaps you can make this fantasy- a reality. Just saying. This is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts dance along the page like a sweet melody. ~ Brandy John Gondolf October 14, 2018 at 5:56 PM Thank you, Brandy, I think perhaps these fantasies will remain an echo deep in my mind. John

Heidi Sands October 14, 2018 at 2:08 PM Very nice John! Well written :) John Gondolf October 14, 2018 at 2:16 PM Thank you, Heidi.

Carolyn Devonshire October 14, 2018 at 10:54 AM The images our subconscious minds release when we're dreaming can be amazing, John. The butterflies, fantasies and make-believe ships would make we want to sleep all of the time. What a joy it is to be set free like this. Awesome writing, as usual, John! Hugs, Carolyn John Gondolf October 14, 2018 at 11:21 AM Thank you so much, Carolyn, I appreciate it. John

Silent One October 14, 2018 at 9:11 AM This poem rhymes and flows so well... John Gondolf October 14, 2018 at 9:17 AM Thanks, SO, I appreciate it. John