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A Whimsical Fantasy

dreaming in clouds as the night time unfolds sliding down rainbows and looking for gold searching the dark for a lover to hold keeping you warm on a night that’s so cold under the stars watching lunar eclipse with your sweet lover on make believe ships lost in the clouds on your fantasy trips butterfly kisses so soft on your lips embraces that take you to faraway lands strolling bare footed on pearly white sands feeling caresses with gentle soft hands aching for passion your body demands alone with these feelings my thoughts are confined being alone now my will has resigned whispers from breezes that come from behind fantasies echoing deep in my mind October 14, 2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/22/2018 4:57:00 PM

Lovely, John. Congrats on your well deserved top win.

John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2018 5:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/18/2018 7:11:00 PM

Nicely done, John - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)

John Gondolf
Date: 10/18/2018 8:41:00 PM

Thanks, Greg, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/18/2018 2:06:00 PM

It is amazing, because in dreams- or a fantasy, anything is possible. :) So, with that being said. This Fantasy has become real. (Just imagine) Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 10/18/2018 2:28:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. I have many fantasies, many of which I will keep to myself, and my imagination is vivid. :) John

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/18/2018 11:06:00 AM

THIS IS GOING INTO MY FAVS! Where to begin? Until the last stanza, I actually wanted to live inside your imagery, then I was hit with reality which is darn realistic. This is profound and I swear I actually heard the sweet ache of musical notes accompany my read. Love it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Gondolf
Date: 10/18/2018 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for this wonderful comment and the fav, CayCay, I'm glad you liked it. Now you know what goes on inside my head, problem is, it's only a fantasy. And sorry I brought you back to reality dear friend. John

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/16/2018 7:15:00 PM

You created a beautiful beach scene of love, John!! MY COMPLIMENTS!

John Gondolf
Date: 10/16/2018 7:23:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2018 5:34:00 PM

this is beautifuly lyrical John. Romantic and well metered! I love it.

John Gondolf
Date: 10/16/2018 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Constance La France

Date: 10/15/2018 6:49:00 PM

John, you have penned a lovely rhyming poem, I just love your whimsical write ~

John Gondolf
Date: 10/15/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate that. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/14/2018 3:41:00 PM

:) I like the thought of butterfly kisses. It is soooo playful and romantic. Who knows John, perhaps you can make this fantasy- a reality. Just saying. This is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts dance along the page like a sweet melody. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 10/14/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, I think perhaps these fantasies will remain an echo deep in my mind. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2018 2:08:00 PM

Very nice John! Well written :)

John Gondolf
Date: 10/14/2018 2:16:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/14/2018 10:54:00 AM

The images our subconscious minds release when we're dreaming can be amazing, John. The butterflies, fantasies and make-believe ships would make we want to sleep all of the time. What a joy it is to be set free like this. Awesome writing, as usual, John! Hugs, Carolyn

John Gondolf
Date: 10/14/2018 11:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Carolyn, I appreciate it. John

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2018 9:11:00 AM

This poem rhymes and flows so well...

John Gondolf
Date: 10/14/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, SO, I appreciate it. John