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Cheerful view as up on the high hill Our birds sing with gusto and elation. From phlox to daisies, butterflies flit and thrill, Cheerful view as up on the high hill, One can hear the mystic notes of a flute still, Songs that pacify the soul, with sensation. Cheerful view as up on the high hill, Our birds sing with gusto and elation. 21 May 2021 Placed 3 Try a Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 2/6/2022 3:21:00 AM
Cheerful are the songs of birds. When they sing with elation, our hearts are buoyed up.... ! Beautiful, Victor !
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Date: 6/11/2021 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Victor, with this natural beauty, as glimpsed from a hilltop. So lovely! :)
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:09:00 PM
Victor, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/25/2021 12:57:00 PM
Awwww, I love this entry Victor. A top winner for me. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:38:00 AM
So creatively stated, Victor - a "cheerful," gentle picture from the top of a hill. Congratulations on your win.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/25/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thank you. Victor
Date: 5/25/2021 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write about the, "Cheerful view as up on the high hill," I wish I was on your hill with the flowers, birds and butterflies. Have a blessed day..................
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/25/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thank you. Victor
Date: 5/25/2021 8:36:00 AM
Hello Hello Hello Victor - I very much liked your theme. You wrote with illusion and imagery that makes this poetic. Your scene is peaceful for certain with beauty attached. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing. Blessings always.
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:29:00 PM
Back just to say congratulations on your contest win, you deserve it with a fine penned poem
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Date: 5/23/2021 11:59:00 AM
How I would love to be on that hill, a lovely write Victor… Belle
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Date: 5/22/2021 7:15:00 AM
Victor, you penned that lovely poem; this one is significantly going in my favorite; your perfect wording and magnific symbolism undoubtedly add more quietness to the scene. Have a blessed day, dear friend
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Date: 5/21/2021 7:46:00 PM
I love that third line!
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:07:00 PM
You paint a very tranquil scene with your words Victor, Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2021 3:45:00 PM
I think this one is sure to place. It's so lovely.
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Date: 5/21/2021 1:13:00 PM
- A wonderful place to enjoy the joys of life, Victor ... best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2021 11:12:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Victor, good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/21/2021 6:49:00 AM
Hi Victor, Your write has such a delightful tone and vibe. The photo compliments your “ triolet “ very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/21/2021 5:11:00 AM
Written with your breezy flair!
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:49:00 AM
Cheerful tone to your rhythms--enjoyed the read, Victor.
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Date: 5/21/2021 3:20:00 AM
what a charming poem Victor, I am not a great fan of triolet poems this is a little gem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2021 2:57:00 AM
Lovely and musical, Victor:) a treat to the senses:)
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