Victor Buhagiar Poet Triolet

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A Whiff of Happiness

Cheerful view as up on the high hill
Our birds sing with gusto and elation.

From phlox to daisies, butterflies flit and thrill,
Cheerful view as up on the high hill,
One can hear the mystic notes of a flute still,
Songs that pacify the soul, with sensation.

Cheerful view as up on the high hill,
Our birds sing with gusto and elation.


21 May 2021

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Valsa George February 6, 2022 at 3:21 AM Cheerful are the songs of birds. When they sing with elation, our hearts are buoyed up.... ! Beautiful, Victor !

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 11, 2021 at 3:54 PM Congratulations on your win, Victor, with this natural beauty, as glimpsed from a hilltop. So lovely! :)

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:09 PM Victor, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:57 PM Awwww, I love this entry Victor. A top winner for me. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week my friend. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:38 AM So creatively stated, Victor - a "cheerful," gentle picture from the top of a hill. Congratulations on your win. Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you. Victor

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2021 at 9:58 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write about the, "Cheerful view as up on the high hill," I wish I was on your hill with the flowers, birds and butterflies. Have a blessed day.................. Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you. Victor

Lisa Ricci May 25, 2021 at 8:36 AM Hello Hello Hello Victor - I very much liked your theme. You wrote with illusion and imagery that makes this poetic. Your scene is peaceful for certain with beauty attached. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing. Blessings always.

Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 10:29 PM Back just to say congratulations on your contest win, you deserve it with a fine penned poem

Beryl Edmonds May 23, 2021 at 11:59 AM How I would love to be on that hill, a lovely write Victor… Belle

Sotto Poet May 22, 2021 at 7:15 AM Victor, you penned that lovely poem; this one is significantly going in my favorite; your perfect wording and magnific symbolism undoubtedly add more quietness to the scene. Have a blessed day, dear friend

Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 7:46 PM I love that third line!

Tom Cunningham May 21, 2021 at 4:07 PM You paint a very tranquil scene with your words Victor, Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2021 at 3:45 PM I think this one is sure to place. It's so lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2021 at 1:13 PM - A wonderful place to enjoy the joys of life, Victor ... best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper May 21, 2021 at 11:12 AM Beautiful imagery, Victor, good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. May 21, 2021 at 6:49 AM Hi Victor, Your write has such a delightful tone and vibe. The photo compliments your “ triolet “ very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker May 21, 2021 at 5:11 AM Written with your breezy flair!

Vijay Pandit May 21, 2021 at 4:49 AM Cheerful tone to your rhythms--enjoyed the read, Victor.

Jan Allison May 21, 2021 at 3:20 AM what a charming poem Victor, I am not a great fan of triolet poems this is a little gem:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel May 21, 2021 at 2:57 AM Lovely and musical, Victor:) a treat to the senses:)