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A Wheezing Rat

a wheezing rat - - hefty vet bills and a smiling daughter for Roy's Kintsukuroi contest

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Roy Jerden

Date: 1/17/2014 7:47:00 PM

Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2013 10:31:00 PM

LOL! There's nothing magical as a child's smile after saving her pet...Love your Senryu and best wishes for the contest! Hope your weekend's going great! xxAnnalise

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/18/2013 10:16:00 PM

How we care for our pets. Fun write. Thanks for the smile.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/18/2013 2:02:00 PM

Hey Jack, quick enjoyed your wit tonight, hope you are doing okay ;) lfde

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2013 5:05:00 PM

oh wow, stark images fill this page, jack.. a senryu at it;s finest.. huggs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/15/2013 10:55:00 AM

Aha to satisfy her pet whims eh. Witty kariok...oh whats dat name again. I likd yor humord title too. And eh watch out d rat doesnt make her wheeze. Mery xmas

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2013 5:45:00 AM

Great showing of talent in writing this one..Interesting subject..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/14/2013 10:03:00 PM

:) love animal poems. everybody's happy.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/14/2013 9:33:00 PM

Brilliant, a simply brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this poem of a wonderful pet, the love of a daughter is more important than the cost of a vet bill! You have captured the heart of owning a child's pet! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 9:26:00 PM

hmmm, I don't even know which contest this is!!! Wheezing rat, how funny. Jack, thanks for catching up on my poems tonight. You are a great friend. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2013 5:40:00 PM

LOL you know I haven't found this contest yet the contest list is a mile long! Happy Holidays Light & Love

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/14/2013 5:30:00 PM

Love it, a beautiful inspiring write. Best of luck in the comp.