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A Well Deserved Break

water towers sag in rusted sunlight under the weight of rain & time held up by raw fear of embarrassment & two determined steel bars i offer myself, like an aquatic Atlas to bear the load just long enough for them to catch their breath or get a well earned massage on their knotted, sun-wrecked, iron spines

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Date: 3/9/2023 10:51:00 PM
Another one that feels like it has a painting lurking behind it - well painted with your words
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C.W. Bryan
Date: 3/10/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much. I've been workshopping this one for a while now, I'm glad with how it turned out!

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