A Well Deserved Break

water towers sag
in rusted sunlight
under the weight 
of rain & time

held up by raw
fear of embarrassment
& two determined steel bars

i offer myself,
like an aquatic Atlas
to bear the load

just long enough
for them to catch 
their breath

or get a well earned
massage on their knotted,
sun-wrecked, iron spines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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