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A Weightloss Journey - a Life Changing Dream

Shortness of breath, the struggle with stairs The paranoid thoughts, of judgemental stares Tomorrow I'll start, next week I will too. The person you're fooling can be only you. You carry on, each day just the same. Every week again and again No planning, no prepping, just take and away. Spiralling down, delay underway Hoping and dreaming, I'll do this one day! One month later, a burger, a pie Feeling low, as life passes by Outstretched clothes, low confidence too It's now your decide to do this for you! You take to the web, to find nearest group Hoping and praying "Please not only soup"! The hardest part? First step through the door. Always remember, who you're doing this for. You meet all the members and go through the plan. At this point you realise, "Oh yes I can". Now weighing and measuring, healthy A & B The change is incredible for all to see. The feeling of pride, the spring in your step. It's now you can't wait for what life brings next.

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Date: 10/2/2023 1:32:00 PM
Brilliant!! Well done. Enjoyed reading this.
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Caroline Smith
Date: 10/2/2023 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Jeanette, it's quite a personal one

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