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A Weeping Willow Tree

Tiny droplets released from a weeping willow tree Gently touch things of all sorts to cool burning anger to relieve this passive fear and soften the hearts of we the cursed dead, finally returning to the ground.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/10/2017 3:16:00 PM

Felicia nice to meet you.I have enjoyed your poem. I have done a free verse on the same topic. Will submit it soon. I've done a monoku on the same topic. Have a good day my friend.

Felicia Jarvis
Date: 8/16/2017 3:43:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. I will read your poem you mentioned, soon.

Rickey Chatham

Date: 5/25/2017 1:19:00 AM

Weeping willow is a nice alteration. Metaphors run through my mind as I connect the meaning of the words to life abundance. maybe the tombstones of loved ones rest beneath the shadows of the tree of life and hope. Reincarnation of all things... we may come back as something else, mother nature is closest and around us, voices of souls from another life. excellent poem, my mind wanders as I think of possibilities. Compai

Felicia Jarvis
Date: 5/25/2017 12:15:00 PM

I believe that we can always find "hope" under situations which look hopeless. Thank you for your deep comment, Ricky.

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/17/2017 4:10:00 AM

Oh weep you willow and cry for all the injustices. Very cool Felicia.

Felicia Jarvis
Date: 5/17/2017 4:15:00 AM

Thank you, Phil.