A Weeping Willow Tree

Tiny droplets released from a weeping willow tree
Gently touch things of all sorts
to cool burning anger
to relieve this passive fear
and soften the hearts of we the cursed dead,
finally returning to the ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 8/10/2017 3:16:00 PM
Felicia nice to meet you.I have enjoyed your poem. I have done a free verse on the same topic. Will submit it soon. I've done a monoku on the same topic. Have a good day my friend.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 8/16/2017 3:43:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. I will read your poem you mentioned, soon.
Date: 5/25/2017 1:19:00 AM
Weeping willow is a nice alteration. Metaphors run through my mind as I connect the meaning of the words to life abundance. maybe the tombstones of loved ones rest beneath the shadows of the tree of life and hope. Reincarnation of all things... we may come back as something else, mother nature is closest and around us, voices of souls from another life. excellent poem, my mind wanders as I think of possibilities. Compai
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 5/25/2017 12:15:00 PM
I believe that we can always find "hope" under situations which look hopeless. Thank you for your deep comment, Ricky.
Date: 5/17/2017 4:10:00 AM
Oh weep you willow and cry for all the injustices. Very cool Felicia.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 5/17/2017 4:15:00 AM
Thank you, Phil.