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A Weeping Willow Mourns

Answer me, oh Willow Tree As you weep so low Only trouble do I see Why do your tears flow Has the wind not confided That love will humble all That though we are divided We’ll bond before we fall Answer me, oh Willow Tree Is your sorrowing for me 1/17/18 Contest: 10 lines, 5 words, Rhyme II Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/21/2018 9:16:00 PM

I love this. Congrats on your well deserved win, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2018 9:44:00 PM

Thank you so much !!!!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2018 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Mike, love this poem! Hugs Eve~`*

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2018 9:11:00 PM

Thanks so much and congratulations to you as well xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2018 5:47:00 PM

Willows always instill a sense of sadness and this is so evident in your rhyme Mike, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2018 7:15:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan Happy Saturday!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2018 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations Mike :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2018 11:42:00 AM

And congratulations to you xxoo

Lu Loo

Date: 1/20/2018 11:13:00 AM

deep and full of such loneliness, great poem, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so much!!!!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/19/2018 10:53:00 AM

Beautiful work, Mike. Reminds me of the great poetry I read as a young man, that inspired me to read more and then write.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2018 11:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joe, Happy Friday!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2018 12:50:00 PM

Well expressed, I hope the judge appreciates this fine piece.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/18/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thanks so much, Richard!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2018 9:22:00 AM

A great entry for the contest Mike! : )

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/18/2018 10:23:00 AM

Thanks again, Connie!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/17/2018 3:26:00 PM

Such a smooth flowing, deep and pensive poem Mike full of yearning.. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/18/2018 7:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate your kind words xxoo

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2018 2:27:00 PM

Your words are flowing like rivers today Mike...A deep sorrowful poem...

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thanks, yes sometimes the words flow , I like those days best, Happy Wednesday!!

Judith S

Date: 1/17/2018 1:19:00 PM

Great topic and write within the restrictive parameters Mike! There is something about a weeping willow tree that seems wise and ancient. Best in the contest!

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Judy, Happy Wednesday !!