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A Weeping Willow Mourns

My prison cell is loneliness. My cries and murmurings confess that bars invisible now press and paralyze with heavy stress and desolation. May God bless those deeply mired in misery, too sad to pray expectantly, the isolated ones like me. Weeping willows mourn and sigh for melancholy ones who cry. not autobiographical January 22, 2018, entered in Brian Strand's Middle-January Standard Contest

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Date: 4/15/2018 10:53:00 PM
Lovely. Belated congrats on your podium medal finish, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/15/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much! Janice
Date: 2/8/2018 10:23:00 AM
Janice, you have a powerful gift. In one poem you are light-hearted and fun, and here you present an internal struggle and longing. Great pull for the reader - thank you. Keep it up
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:45:00 AM
Kevin, you have made my day! Thank you so much. Janice
Date: 1/23/2018 8:11:00 AM
Well done Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/23/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! Janice
Date: 1/22/2018 7:37:00 PM
Mournful sentiments beautifully expressed in lovely rhymes, Janice. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/22/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 1/22/2018 5:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice. I love how you worked with the rhyme. I see double congrats are in order.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/22/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes! Janice
Date: 1/21/2018 9:05:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/21/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/20/2018 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janice, nicely done! Hugs Eve~`*
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 1/20/2018 5:40:00 PM
what melancholy lines Janice, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/20/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 1/20/2018 11:10:00 AM
so true, may God bless those in misery is right, beautifully expressed sweet lady ;) congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/20/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Luloo. Thanks for sponsoring. Janice
Date: 1/18/2018 12:51:00 AM
the mournful willow is extremely popular compared to the other themes. I enjoyed the rhyming pattern you chose and your expression of the melancholy theme.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! While writing this, I kept thinking of "Willow, Weep for Me" (late sixties, by British duo Chad and Jeremy.) It's worth a listen. Janice
Date: 1/16/2018 11:20:00 AM
Beautifully done, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2018 12:29:00 PM
Line, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 1/16/2018 9:41:00 AM
Glad to see this certain winner.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2018 10:02:00 AM
Curtis, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 1/15/2018 8:36:00 PM
Melancholy wonderfully expressed Janice with somber imagery and rhymes conveying sadness and loneliness. Wel done and best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/15/2018 9:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 1/15/2018 7:02:00 PM
Oh Janice! I love that clincher line "Weeping willows..." Superb!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/15/2018 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhoda! Janice
Date: 1/15/2018 5:01:00 PM
A well rhyming poem..very well executed..best for a win, Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/15/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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