A Week With the Girl of My Dreams

I met her Sunday in the park
Between our hearts there was a spark
We'll have to wait and see
If we are each others need

Monday rolled around and then
A bit of luck we met again
I laid on the manly charm
Her hands were soft and warm

Tuesday came and Tuesday passed
Her number I forgot to ask
What a fool I was
Did I just lose true love

Wednesday she somehow found me
Standing below my balcony
I looked down into her eyes
A very pleasant surprise

Thursday it was burning love
A girl like her more than enough
For a man like me 
She's all that I can see

Friday a day like I've never known
With cloud nine far down below
I am flying high
The best day of my life

Saturday all I could see
The whole of the week was but a dream
I woke up Sunday in the park
The afternoon sky was cloudy and dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:26 PM
A charming poem, very sweet sentiments though a sad ending. I like the innocence of your words...the title is what drew me in and I am so glad I stayed.:-) I really enjoyed reading this..great writing :-) blessings, lynn
Hauser  Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:08 AM
:0) thank you
Turner Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Funny but very sad Mike. I love your style. You have become part of my daily read!
Hauser  Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Thank you my friend...I'm honored
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