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A Wedding Planned

Hearts and Flowers The Eiffel Tower An engagement ring Reason to sing A wedding planned Passion's quicksand Soon afterward ~ Romance interred

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Date: 2/11/2022 10:47:00 AM
Cool, an arranged marriage that lasted so Long...... Sad story in the poem. Sometimes it calls for more than one try. Sometimes a partmer is snatched by death. Marriages are not all perfect. Glad yours is. Pangie
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2022 11:49:00 AM
Ooh. My marriage isn't all that perfect. It's perfectly functional though. (There's a big difference there). Thanks, Pangie. :) gw
Date: 2/11/2022 4:07:00 AM
Oh no! How painful. It's nice to read you again after my long break! You tell, oh! so much in few words. I love that.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2022 10:43:00 AM
A valued comment, indeed, Swetha. Thank you! ... I see that this poem is all of 21 words. It's a new style, I believe -- 'Fewer Words, Fewer Worries.' Thanks again, Gershon
Date: 2/10/2022 11:01:00 PM
Another sad story.. ..... Love shouldn't be allowed to die so fast !
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Valsa George
Date: 2/13/2022 4:08:00 AM
If marital love dies out very fast, it is very sad state. I still hold that opinion. I never meant your personal case. One with a sense of humor will see small differences in a healthy way, I am quite sure. May your relationship go strong on and on!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2022 10:37:00 AM
Maybe not, but purely 'romantic love' doesn't stand up to the test of a real relationship, such as marriage, very well. You'll probably be shocked to learn that my marriage was arranged, and after 27 years it's doing just fine. ~ Lower Expectations

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