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As a weary rambler, I'm nearby and resting. With arousing, he grasps his ecstatic settling. His withered bones are currently lively. It's been done multiple times formerly. Bequests themselves with musings to meditate. His danger is gone, and his agony is replete. The burning sun won't be a fount of hotness. He won't be lashed by calamitous distress. A corona of splendid cosmic stars hedges me. With the coziness of the moon mirrored body. Inevitably my bewitching will be what I imply. To assist me with the drudgery of the next workday. My feet cannot scrutinize any fierce pebble. Neither stump nor crags can induce him to tumble. He says farewell to all his distress and dread. It propounds that you may now sleep in embed. How I crave a sight that all linger fine worldly. Moreover, follow the flawless angels in the sky. Slumber of this body will be a peaceful freeman. I will never shed another tear in my life again. You can hunt down such endless glees outside. The ear tuned, as yet the speech snide. Oh my God, prepare me for what is to come. As the well runs dry, I truly hope to bore some. Written: November 24, 2021 ''W'' New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/30/2021 8:40:00 AM
What a wonderful rhyme story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/29/2021 2:00:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your Second Place in in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and I love the image used ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:15:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Lasaad, peace and tranquility for a weary rambler you have created. Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest … Belle
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Date: 11/25/2021 12:54:00 PM
Your poem on the weary traveler is written with beauty and memorable expressions, Lasaad. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:24:00 AM
Your weariness makes for wonderful poetry, Lasaad. Alas i too have got past taking to the mountains and the great outdoors.
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Date: 11/25/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thanks for your support, Harry, and appreciate your kind words, Your message means a lot to me. I wish a mery thanksgiving to you and yours and to keep well.
Date: 11/25/2021 4:27:00 AM
Weary at the cusp of the ultimate--I will never shed another tear in my life again--this line speaks to state of mind. Emotive write. All the best, Lasaad.
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thanks for your support, Vijay, and appreciate your kind words. Your message means a lot to me. I wish a merry thanksgiving to you and yours and keep well.
Date: 11/25/2021 3:32:00 AM
All those years of rambling take their toll. Hope you're keeping well Lasaad. Tom
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:13:00 AM
Thanks for your constant support and kindness, Tom. Your message means a lot to me. I wish a very thanksgiving to you and yours and to keep well.
Date: 11/25/2021 3:01:00 AM
Quote:I will never shed another tear in my life again....This line jumped out at me in a poem full of memorable images...good luck in the contest...Delice
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Delice, your delightful comment is really uplifting to me. I hope you keep well.
Date: 11/25/2021 12:59:00 AM
You wrote this poem in a truly weary state. You captured the meaning perfectly. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Victor. Your delightful comment is uplifting to me and appreciated. I hope you keep well.
Date: 11/25/2021 12:25:00 AM
May the well of your beautiful soul never run dry.. May the mine of your amazing poetry never cease to produce precious gems.. May the wanderer in you ever embarks on fulfilling and nourishing journeys.. The state of a weary soul, every human soul would relate to.. we get drained in time and place then we get ignited by what surrounds us of beauty in Mother Nature and human nature.. so we rise and write the wonderful of poetry! So much pleased reading your beauty, Lassad.. wishing you the best of win! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 11/25/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thanks for your constant support and kindness, dear sister Besma. Your insightful comment means a lot to me. I wish you all the best and yours too. Keep well.