A Wave Waltz of Love

Dance,
My Love;
Hold
Me close
With moonlight;
Soft sheets;
Arms
So tight.
Forever,
Passion's delight!
Fingertips
Carress
Light.
Loving,
With you, is
Always
Right
As hearts
Dance.

06/12/2015

For contest "Wave Waltz"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Austin Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 1:27 PM
This flows along so nicely, like a Strauss waltz. daver
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 6:38 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Janet, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
Callus Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Hi Janet! So pleased to be back with merited congratulations...and to share this podium finish with you:) // paul
Nance Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Oh very romantic! :)
La France Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Janet, I love this beautiful waltzing poem 7 and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my dancing flowers poem
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:11 PM
oh YES, hearts are doing the dancing. LOVE this. Congrats on your win.
Cervenka Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Thanks Andrea. Loved your dancing hearts too.
Gorelick Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Made me sigh...Congrats! BG
Cervenka Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Thanks Barbara!
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Congrats Janet, on taking 2nd place in my contest! A wonderfully romantic write! Well done! Love, Kim
Cervenka Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Kim, many thanks on the contest. I know judging can be difficult. We have so many great writers here. Thanks for sponsoring!
Callus Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 12:24 PM
I like your romantic take on this love-waltz, Janet! May you dance to your heart's content! gl in the contest. // paul
Cervenka Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Thanks so much Paul. Can't decide on this first attempt, so many of these are very good including yours. Jan
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 4:10 PM
a lovely sensual poem Janet - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Thanks so much Jan. Coming to visit soonm
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