Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

A Warriors Call

Regarded as a warrior 
this is true
Respect shown her a 
definite must
Depth in knowledge 
always knew
Not one to be flattered 
by the lust

The fool she had played 
long ago
Life's experience gave 
her an edge
Not what's said but what 
you show
Her shield she had taken 
a pledged

Her words came natural 
as I breathe
Those words only I can
understand
Warrior yet a voice that
could weave
When she fell, on her 
feet she'd land

Ability to be seductive 
or even fight
Either way she knew each 
she'd win
Could be fearful yet a
stunning sight
Having loved only once
being her sin

Basic life she had left
so far behind
To rise above higher and
give her all
Was the best way once 
she did find
So she could answer a 
warriors call

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John Hamilton July 11, 2019 at 11:11 AM Powerful write Brenda, comes from a warriors spirit no doubt! Brenda Chiri August 11, 2019 at 11:54 AM Thank you John!:)

Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2019 at 9:24 AM It’s not silly at all. More women should embrace their inner warrior. Brenda Chiri June 25, 2019 at 9:42 AM Well thank you Rick! But the thought of more women answering that call tends to be a bit scary lol some just were not meant to be so Rick! Just a fact that some of us should not hold power like that!;) just joking Rick! But fatal attraction did come to mind when you said that! Haha! Not a pretty sight! Thank again!;)

John Fleming June 25, 2019 at 8:50 AM I truly like this strong "warrior spirit" that runs right through these warrior poems of your, Brenda...they are invigorating and uplifting; makes one feel as if they themselves can pick themselves up, when decidedly down -- and take on the world! Love that sense of stoic defiance that underpins the ongoing trilogy throughout. Great work! Affectionately yours. :) john Brenda Chiri June 25, 2019 at 9:38 AM John thank you so very much! And I believe if I can pick myself up then anyone can!;) I spent too much time looking for someone to help me up that I lost sight of myself.... I have never needed anyone (wanted yes but never needed) to make me happy I only needed to believe I deserved a happiness! And John I finally believe it! What an eye opener to say the least! So if I have to be a warrior to be like that then so be it... I will answer that warriors call! As always John your words are so appreciated!;) All my affection B;)

Paul Callus June 23, 2019 at 10:33 AM A warrior with lots of self-belief, Brenda. To fall and land on your feet is what keeps you going, no matter what. May you rise to any valid opportunity that comes your way! Hugs // paul Brenda Chiri June 23, 2019 at 9:43 PM Thank you Paul so much! Just had to build that self esteem up i guess! Never want to lose it again!;)

Winged Warrior June 23, 2019 at 9:50 AM Warrior...I've heard that name before?...such excellent writing Bren...I can feel the heat from your fire...a Fav in my court & the Unicorns court as well...sending love your way...bro bro {*J*} Brenda Chiri June 23, 2019 at 9:41 PM Bro bro hum.i wonder where you heard that name before! Lol! And you are still so silly bro bro! Well I guess I wanted to be like my brother!;) Thank you so much WW your comments are so appreciated! And the unicorns too!;)

Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2019 at 8:40 AM What a triumphant piece. You captured the warrior spirit Brenda. Brenda Chiri June 23, 2019 at 9:38 PM Ah thank you so much Rick! I know it's silly but I relate to her so much!;)

Susan Ashley June 22, 2019 at 10:59 PM You are on fire, Dragon Fire! Your poem is conveyed with such exquisite expression, thoughtful and empowering with beautiful rhythm and rhymes. Every stanza is potent and meaningful. A stunning portrait of a warrior, my dear twinster! Warmest wishes and hugs, dear sis.. ~the Sane One ;) Brenda Chiri June 23, 2019 at 4:55 AM Thank you my dear sane sister!;) it's fun writing these kinds of poems! And my tired but true rhymes are always such fun!;)

Nick Trim June 22, 2019 at 5:51 PM you like these warrior writes don't you, great write muppet, not talking me for some reason in this summer season yet me you're freezing, e e zing lol good stuck Brenda Chiri June 22, 2019 at 6:02 PM Yea well what can I say I identify with her muppet!;) you are about so silly! I told you I don't get on Facebook messenger that often you nut!;) try soupmailing me! Haha!