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A Warm Heart

A warm heart, yet… It sizzles with anxiety And melts away emotions That still linger on. A sincere heart, yet… It chokes with evasiveness And chars every feeling That flickers with hope A bleeding heart, yet… One sleeve is left exposed And burns with desire To escape all flames A singed heart, yet… It smokes it’s own desire And reasons with love That flares without control Tammy Snyder

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Date: 3/27/2014 12:34:00 PM
Lovely poem...from heart to heart. // paul
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Date: 2/18/2014 2:23:00 AM
Thank you Tammy for your kind words and encouragement.You clearly have a warm heart.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/17/2014 5:35:00 PM
What a wonderful write Tammy. This flows so well...Hugs Tim
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Date: 2/17/2014 4:33:00 PM
Tammy, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/17/2014 11:40:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tammy !!!- I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/17/2014 3:51:00 PM
- Enjoyable with new "poet" friends :)))
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Tammy Snyder
Date: 2/17/2014 12:53:00 PM
Wow! Thank you very much for your kind words! I may have found myself a real nice community of poets that support each other, a nice change for me since I hardly have anyone read them let alone make comments on them, and it is much appreciated to hear what others think of my work, boosts the confidence that is for sure! I have a few people that have written in on my one poem, so please bare with me, I want to look at your work as well, and when I do I will be sure to write to you my feelings!
Date: 2/17/2014 11:12:00 AM
Fantastic writing Tammy! Love this piece. Welcome to the soup! :)
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Tammy Snyder
Date: 2/17/2014 12:55:00 PM
Thank you! It has been a warm welcome from people like yourself writing in to tell me about my poem. This is nice since I have not let anyone see them really or get complimented on them. I look forward to reading your work as well, bare with me, I have a lot of reading to do! Thanks again!
Date: 2/17/2014 10:55:00 AM
This is an epic. Poem that speaks to the heart and is an interesting write. I was left speechless, and that is a good thing. A great poem Tammy, welcome to petrysoup. Xoxo :)
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Date: 2/17/2014 7:55:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Nice thoughts here of passion and honesty. I wish you the best here as you post and comment on the work of others. I have found many friends here and we share a love of poetry.
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Tammy Snyder
Date: 2/17/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, I appreciate that! I have been looking for free poetry contests but find that I have to "upgrade" (pay $$$) on some of these websites in order to post a free poem, go figger! Now with this website, it will take me some time to understand it all and I just really want to make one of my poems into a lyric, one poem made into a song can possibly make millions! haha! anyhoo, I read a little of your work, nice stuff ya got there Mr. (oops, Mrs., oops, Ms. Reason A. Poteet...for some reason I believe you are a man...am I correct?
Date: 2/17/2014 7:00:00 AM
lovely and uplifting, Tammy, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Tammy Snyder
Date: 2/17/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, I appreciate that! I have been looking for free poetry contests but find that I have to "upgrade" (pay $$$) on some of these websites in order to post a free poem, go figger! Now with this website, it will take me some time to understand it all and I just really want to make one of my poems into a lyric, one poem made into a song can possibly make millions! I read a little of your work, your a crazy loon like me! Love it!

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