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A Waltz Upon a Leaf

Teetering on a tangent this pearlescent dew drop Balancing midrib, it is but A breath away from oblivion's slide, yet Held in place by Mother Nature’s lace A globule of life An ocean full of microbes surfing its globe Pirouetting with life’s balance it quivers in its emerald valley Blinding sunrays bleeding colourful apparitions From this tiny orb, a disco ball Where butterflies ballet A Sundance in glitter A glide to nature’s symphony A waltz upon a leaf 19 Aug. 2014

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Date: 1/4/2015 10:39:00 AM
This write is truly deep and very inspiring. I, that write deliberately to appeal to the reader that may be less knowledgeable in poetry dearly love to read such well crafted and deep poetry. Such is like apple pie to my tastes. Another 7 that could easily be a 10 if they allowed that rating..
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Mark Trichet
Date: 1/4/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Robert, such kind words. Nature is so inspiring...
Date: 11/27/2014 9:35:00 AM
simply marvelous in imagery and flow... love this, mark.. you got me!.. huggs..
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Mark Trichet
Date: 12/3/2014 10:54:00 PM
Hey thanks Nette, really appreciate your thoughts - huggs back
Date: 11/21/2014 9:19:00 PM
wow, Mark, this is not the work of a novice. this is excellent poetry. gets a 7 in that little rating box and nothing less.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 11/22/2014 4:26:00 PM
Hey thanx Andrea, appreciate your kind words. It means a lot..
Date: 11/9/2014 9:47:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery, Mark! Held in place by Mother Nature’s lace...that's a great line! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Mark Trichet
Date: 11/20/2014 4:03:00 PM
Hi Rhonda thanks for your visit, glad you like it.

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