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A WallPainted White

White paint on a wall Is a canvas ready to be re-done With a different bright colour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/4/2017 5:39:00 PM
I like. the poem reminds me of Michelangelo story with the stone that became David.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2017 3:04:00 PM
My poem reminds you of Michelangelo story with the stone! Wow! Well I am pleased that my pom has a memory for you. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/20/2017 5:05:00 PM
Now what color would tht be? Maybe one of your favorites?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2017 12:29:00 PM
Yes I would paint one wall yellow a soft yellow or pink.Have a nice da my friend.
Date: 3/25/2017 7:01:00 AM
Darlene, I love these imaginative lines
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2017 5:29:00 PM
hello solomon,thank you so kindly.
Date: 3/20/2017 10:11:00 PM
Nice poem but I think it is a senryu since it is not about nature. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2017 10:36:00 AM
Matthew what is a senryu poem?Thank you for telling me.
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Date: 3/21/2017 9:41:00 AM
I doh't think that senryu I will check it out thank you for telling me. Peace and Love.
Date: 3/20/2017 6:50:00 PM
Hey, Darlene. you have those ads at the bottom of your comments too. Certainly not poetry! I really like the thought in your KU!! SEVEN
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you for answering my question. I won;t bother with them.This was a fun poem to write. I enjoy your poetry.
Date: 3/18/2017 7:53:00 AM
I like this Darlene. Nice :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2017 12:16:00 PM
This happened to me. The wall was white to start off with, then yellow flowers were painted ,then in the middle red dots were added in. Then My husband passed, Then 4 coats of white paint was used to get off the unwanted paint.
Date: 3/17/2017 3:30:00 AM
Great imagery... Well done...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Suprata Nice to meet you
Date: 3/16/2017 8:57:00 PM
Or it sits in a museum on sale for two million dollars!! :) Loved this!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2017 2:01:00 PM
Hello Arthur, yes you are right or it sits on the wall for a million dollars selling price.
Date: 3/16/2017 6:42:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose,so many colors can go a a white wall. My dead husband painted a wall white,then yellow flowers,then theinside of thefower red. When the wall was painted white again, it took 4 coats of paint to get the color off.
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