Notes About The Poem

A Walled Garden

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A garden with walls high and deep
Brilliant daisies swaying in the sweet breeze
Cabbage, cauliflower and leeks thriving, flourishing
Down crunching gravel paths I dance
Everything in this garden is lush and profuse
Fig trees for the plucking
Gooseberry and red currant bushes, heavy with fruit
Harmonies of birds, drift all about and above
In my dream, I walk with beauty
Jasmine kisses my soul
Keep me in this glorious paradise 
Lilac trees perfume the air
Morning glory set my heart at rest
Now, I listen to the ripple of a stream
On the surface, water lilies float lazily
Peach trees, old and gnarled like old men stand guard
Quince, with glossy, bushy leaves grow against a wall
Rows of pumpkins glow in the sun
Strawberry patches, sweet and tasty beckon me
Tangled purple grapes hang from branches
Under a trellis, a bench to pause
Vines of red roses trail and dangle sweetly
Wasps buzz and bees hover, butterflies rest
Xanadu exists beyond my closed eyes
Yams, potatoes ready to harvest are waiting
Zucchini, tomatoes, and carrots ripe for the picking



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August 18, 2014


Poetry/Abecedarian/A Walled Garden
Copyright Protected, ID 08-591-906-18
All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France


Submitted to the Standard contest, 101 In A Row - 4
sponsor, Poet Destroyer, Judged 09/2014

Fifth Place
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Written for the Standard contest Abecedarian
sponsor,  Shadow Hamilton, Judged 08/2014

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Richards Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Such a lovely walk through your Xanadu !! thank you for the serenity !! And Congrats to you once again, Constance!
A   Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Thank you for the nice reply...PD
A   Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Broken Wing, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Thanks so much Linda for your support ~~
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:57 PM
I wish I was there it sounds absolutely delightful Connie a stunning pen in this difficult form congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:36 PM
O thank you for the honour of placing so well in your contest, it was a difficult form but I enjoyed the challenge ~~
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Anyone would like to walk in your garden, Constance. congrats
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Thanks Ram ~~
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Such a delight to walk through your garden with you! Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for your kind words Debbie and it is an honour to share the spotlight with you also ~~
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:16 PM
And the deer can't get to them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Thanks so much Joyce for the congrats ~~
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:52 PM
a wonderful ABC poem I just wanted to walk in the garden - a great win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Jan, I found the form difficult so I was shocked to place so well, but extremely happy also ~~
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Brilliant absolutely brilliant how you made this Abecedarian poem feel like a beautiful walk in a garden. Congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:41 PM
O thanks Brenda, I used a garden theme because of all the names of flowers and vegetables, I was sure I could cover each letter, lol ~~
Horne Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:16 AM
love this one, my friend - a form I find very difficult indeed, but you've made it look so easy : )
La France Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Jack, yes I did also find this form difficult ~
A. Sharma Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Brilliant take on theme ! Beautiful pic of paradise u hv painted ! Good luck dear !
La France Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Thank you for your support Upma, I truly appreciate it ~~
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