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~~ A garden with walls high and deep Brilliant daisies swaying in the sweet breeze Cabbage, cauliflower and leeks thriving, flourishing Down crunching gravel paths I dance Everything in this garden is lush and profuse Fig trees for the plucking Gooseberry and red currant bushes, heavy with fruit Harmonies of birds, drift all about and above In my dream, I walk with beauty Jasmine kisses my soul Keep me in this glorious paradise Lilac trees perfume the air Morning glory set my heart at rest Now, I listen to the ripple of a stream On the surface, water lilies float lazily Peach trees, old and gnarled like old men stand guard Quince, with glossy, bushy leaves grow against a wall Rows of pumpkins glow in the sun Strawberry patches, sweet and tasty beckon me Tangled purple grapes hang from branches Under a trellis, a bench to pause Vines of red roses trail and dangle sweetly Wasps buzz and bees hover, butterflies rest Xanadu exists beyond my closed eyes Yams, potatoes ready to harvest are waiting Zucchini, tomatoes, and carrots ripe for the picking _______________________________ August 18, 2014 Poetry/Abecedarian/A Walled Garden Copyright Protected, ID 08-591-906-18 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, 101 In A Row - 4 sponsor, Poet Destroyer, Judged 09/2014 Fifth Place ________________________________ Written for the Standard contest Abecedarian sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 08/2014 First Place

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Date: 7/13/2016 10:27:00 AM
Such a lovely walk through your Xanadu !! thank you for the serenity !! And Congrats to you once again, Constance!
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:59:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thank you for the nice reply...PD
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:20:00 PM
Broken Wing, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda for your support ~~
Date: 9/8/2014 12:57:00 PM
I wish I was there it sounds absolutely delightful Connie a stunning pen in this difficult form congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:36:00 PM
O thank you for the honour of placing so well in your contest, it was a difficult form but I enjoyed the challenge ~~
Date: 9/8/2014 4:56:00 AM
Anyone would like to walk in your garden, Constance. congrats
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Ram ~~
Date: 9/7/2014 8:20:00 PM
Such a delight to walk through your garden with you! Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Debbie and it is an honour to share the spotlight with you also ~~
Date: 9/7/2014 4:16:00 PM
And the deer can't get to them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Joyce for the congrats ~~
Date: 9/7/2014 1:52:00 PM
a wonderful ABC poem I just wanted to walk in the garden - a great win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I found the form difficult so I was shocked to place so well, but extremely happy also ~~
Date: 9/7/2014 1:49:00 PM
Brilliant absolutely brilliant how you made this Abecedarian poem feel like a beautiful walk in a garden. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:41:00 PM
O thanks Brenda, I used a garden theme because of all the names of flowers and vegetables, I was sure I could cover each letter, lol ~~
Date: 8/24/2014 11:16:00 AM
love this one, my friend - a form I find very difficult indeed, but you've made it look so easy : )
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Jack, yes I did also find this form difficult ~
Date: 8/19/2014 8:48:00 AM
Brilliant take on theme ! Beautiful pic of paradise u hv painted ! Good luck dear !
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Date: 8/20/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for your support Upma, I truly appreciate it ~~

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