A Wall of Heat

Limp
the leaves
heavy
the air
angry
the sky
a wall
of heat
pressing
pressing...
unwelcome
even for
minutes
even on
winter's edge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:16 AM
In but a few words you have explained the joy of a bit of heat in winter.
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 9:06 PM
This imagism poem is quite impressive, Gershon. I can imagine the scene very well, and I love the way you ended it. :)
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