A Wall Between

Loves call awaits me

    Or perhaps it is knocking

        What if I answer

            Once opened finding no one 

                Only a wall between us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:43 PM
oh, wow, I could SEE the wall as I got to the end of this one. Love it.
Marcum Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Smile ~ Such amissfulness in regards unto, "Your Beauty;" please forgive myself and, I love this beautiful painting my dear; sooo lovely and of course, "A Beautiful Fave; 'Just Like You!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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February 23, 2011 at 12:30 PM
Smile ~ I do not believe that there could Ever be but a wall between, "Sooo Much Beauty As, 'Your Beautiful Self' &, The Heart That Loves 'Your Sweeetness My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ I Am regretful for having taken so long to return a humbled reply unto, "Your Majestic Light," in regards to SoupMail but, I cannot access its moment my dear yet, this is no excuse so, I Am sorry for ~ cont:)
Haick Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 8:22 PM
Love always conquers all, dear Sha. Sometimes it takes a little longer but it does. Love, Annalise
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:03 PM
If that call is genuine the wall will crumble itself,Sharon.Nice Tanka you have penned here.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.----kashinath
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 4:46 PM
beautiful thought well expressed with images, very visual, shar
Dufresne Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Miss Ruebel !Tear down that wall!''' ;) nice poem Sharon
Pettit Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 2:44 PM
This is a decently written tanka. You have posed an intriguing question here.
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