Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Walk Through Time

Remembering times of fear and disbelief...
When all the words spoken spilled with grief...
From a time of feathered heartache and loss...
Never getting through, and treading with a cross...
Holding pain inside as choices were not mine...
Lifting up my spirits alone with music and time...
Standing tall in a valley as the rocks tumble down...
Glimmers of light peak through as I speak with no sound...
A poets words thrown on the floor till the paper grabs it all...
Expressions of life and love as my whisper answers the call...
My pen and mind project images like a silent movie...
But the words scream out loud to tell of love and misery...
Walls and carpeted floors are my playground to write...
Not just of sadness ,  but a man who found his flight...

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Wilma Neels April 19, 2011 at 11:58 AM An awesome flight indeed Michael.. Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta April 19, 2011 at 11:37 AM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 7:03 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Michael. Love, Carol

Elaine George April 19, 2011 at 4:15 AM Yes! Exactly!!!! Michael. Many congrats on this sensational poem and your sensational win. Lainie

Tahera Mannan April 18, 2011 at 9:15 PM I love the way you ended this gem Michael. Many congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 18, 2011 at 8:35 PM Congrats Michael on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list finally posted to view.. J.G. in happy mode tonight luv..

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2010 at 10:10 AM SPECIAL CHEERS on the win, micheal! :)

Sara Kendrick December 9, 2010 at 3:12 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2010 at 9:55 AM Congratulations on your win Michael in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2010 at 8:11 PM very nicely penned, Michael. Glad I got to read this one finally, by simply reading thru the list of winners. A big belated congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea

Valeria Iliadou November 22, 2010 at 1:38 AM congrats for your win in the contest. Beatiful poem.

Dr Hitendra Mehta November 17, 2010 at 9:48 PM Michael ...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta November 16, 2010 at 4:37 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win, Michael

Wilma Neels November 16, 2010 at 3:58 AM Michael congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with the inspiring write ;) Hope your Tuesday will be a great one.. Btw I aint tired yet.. Will probably feel it in the next few hours ~ love Wilma

Noel Villarosa November 16, 2010 at 12:09 AM Great write, you surely will inspire others to write, congratulations on your big win, Michael. (^_^) Noel.

Carrie Richards November 15, 2010 at 6:19 PM I love the comparisons....(like a silent movie) such fine lines in this poem, too many to quote, but wonderful comparisons!! Congratulations, Michael!!! ~ love, Carrie

Joyce Johnson November 15, 2010 at 4:55 PM Very hear felt poetry praise, Michael. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 15, 2010 at 4:17 PM Congrats Michael on your success in my Poetry Panorama contest .. with this excellent entry and special piece.. always a pleasure to read your work.. appreciate your constant support of my contest endeavors...with luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 15, 2010 at 5:09 AM Appreciate u supporting my current contest luv.. good luck with this entry ... your J.G. in mourning today after my boys in blue LOST to DALLAS.. disgraceful performance... what happened?

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 12, 2010 at 3:33 PM Good realizations about how emotion affects our work as poets and writers and in making choices :)

Sherelle Smith November 6, 2010 at 8:28 AM THE WORDS JUST JUMPED OF THE PAGE INTO MY HEART THESE WAS A GREAT EXPRESSION OF EMOTIONS

Wilma Neels November 5, 2010 at 4:37 AM A man that soar so high with his poetry as his wings.. Beautiful, insights into the man that is Mr. Falotico..

Carrie Richards November 4, 2010 at 6:14 PM What an emotional and introspective poem, this is truly heartfelt. A true poet expressing such pain....you have wowed me with this one, Michael! You have found your flight (wings)....it is poetry.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 4, 2010 at 3:14 PM Magnificent Michael.. such emotion and sensitivity in your lines luv... enjoying the weekend from tonight with my hubby who just drove through torrential rains to be with me..for four days..luv..

Doris Culverhouse November 4, 2010 at 3:11 PM Enjoyed reading your work! Thanks for your comments on mine also.

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