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A Walk Through Time

Remembering times of fear and disbelief... When all the words spoken spilled with grief... From a time of feathered heartache and loss... Never getting through, and treading with a cross... Holding pain inside as choices were not mine... Lifting up my spirits alone with music and time... Standing tall in a valley as the rocks tumble down... Glimmers of light peak through as I speak with no sound... A poets words thrown on the floor till the paper grabs it all... Expressions of life and love as my whisper answers the call... My pen and mind project images like a silent movie... But the words scream out loud to tell of love and misery... Walls and carpeted floors are my playground to write... Not just of sadness , but a man who found his flight...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/19/2011 11:58:00 AM
An awesome flight indeed Michael.. Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Michael
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:15:00 AM
Yes! Exactly!!!! Michael. Many congrats on this sensational poem and your sensational win. Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:15:00 PM
I love the way you ended this gem Michael. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:35:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list finally posted to view.. J.G. in happy mode tonight luv..
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Date: 12/10/2010 10:10:00 AM
SPECIAL CHEERS on the win, micheal! :)
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2010 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:11:00 PM
very nicely penned, Michael. Glad I got to read this one finally, by simply reading thru the list of winners. A big belated congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:38:00 AM
congrats for your win in the contest. Beatiful poem.
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:48:00 PM
Michael ...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/16/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Michael
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:58:00 AM
Michael congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with the inspiring write ;) Hope your Tuesday will be a great one.. Btw I aint tired yet.. Will probably feel it in the next few hours ~ love Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 12:09:00 AM
Great write, you surely will inspire others to write, congratulations on your big win, Michael. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:19:00 PM
I love the comparisons....(like a silent movie) such fine lines in this poem, too many to quote, but wonderful comparisons!! Congratulations, Michael!!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:55:00 PM
Very hear felt poetry praise, Michael. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:17:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your success in my Poetry Panorama contest .. with this excellent entry and special piece.. always a pleasure to read your work.. appreciate your constant support of my contest endeavors...with luv...
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Date: 11/15/2010 5:09:00 AM
Appreciate u supporting my current contest luv.. good luck with this entry ... your J.G. in mourning today after my boys in blue LOST to DALLAS.. disgraceful performance... what happened?
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:33:00 PM
Good realizations about how emotion affects our work as poets and writers and in making choices :)
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:28:00 AM
THE WORDS JUST JUMPED OF THE PAGE INTO MY HEART THESE WAS A GREAT EXPRESSION OF EMOTIONS
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Date: 11/5/2010 4:37:00 AM
A man that soar so high with his poetry as his wings.. Beautiful, insights into the man that is Mr. Falotico..
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:14:00 PM
What an emotional and introspective poem, this is truly heartfelt. A true poet expressing such pain....you have wowed me with this one, Michael! You have found your flight (wings)....it is poetry.
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Date: 11/4/2010 3:14:00 PM
Magnificent Michael.. such emotion and sensitivity in your lines luv... enjoying the weekend from tonight with my hubby who just drove through torrential rains to be with me..for four days..luv..
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Date: 11/4/2010 3:11:00 PM
Dude, I am impressed by your skill. You ripped thoughts from my own soul and put them in this piece. This piece willl last many walks through time because it is epic and will live forever and then some! I read this eight times! each time it was more amazing!
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