A Walk through the Forest

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Written on December 30, 2023

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Seeping through families of oaks,
Surrounded by pines, laurels and all…
Gentle leaves, so alive – yes, they breathe,
Silent like the peace I find here,
Enclosed in their embrace, 
Soft music of dove and robin, praising,
Ever praising with their easy tweet,
Tempering the woods with their melodies,
So old, yes, so old…

Breathlessly praising, 
Stirring the wonder often lying,
Secreted beside cool streams,
Abandoned by moss-grown stones,
Laughing, gurgling, gushing…
With liquid wonder, blessing spirits,
Risking their most intimate beauties,
Lingering in amused giggles,
Calm as the silent grace…
Gentling the wind, the wind’s faint
Struggle to bring with it,
A sense of God’s music, His mystery,
Hesitating to break through,
Intensity, powerful as the cloudless skies,
Yes, those cloudless skies…

Escaping the darkness of a lazy afternoon,
Screaming a warning, rumbles of thunder,
Defeated by the flashes of lightening,
Blazing across the silk sky,
Glancing over the aching trails,
Strewn with dried leaves, maples,
Poplars and oaks, pine needles,
Moments expressed…
Soundless colors, shimmering
On the edge of a prayer,
Mostly peaceful, but ever aware…
God is there – oh, yes, He is there.

Like the wildflowers,
Scattered on the distant dreams,
Unfolding blossoms for the soul,
Flourishing buds, 
Crimson and soft, buttery blond,
Violets, wild and willful,
Pondering the sense of joy, 
Magnificent…
Breaking through the seas,
Seas of laughing scenes, lonely – 

Never lonely in the forest,
Where I go for the stillness, the calm,
The lingering touch of silence,
Blessings from One who knows me,
Knows just what my soul needs…
These forest walks with Him,
Who gives me a reason to believe,
Believe that I can find solace,
In the music of this melodious forest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/6/2025 4:41:00 AM
Another tremendous inspirational poem, I can see this forest described by you before my eyes, your suggestive imagery.
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Date: 1/5/2024 8:12:00 AM
I favor the last stanza Gina, although the entire poem is oozing with God's miracles. So well-written! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:51:00 AM
You left me breathless, “ Scattered on the distant dreams, Unfolding blossoms for the soul, Flourishing buds, Crimson and soft, buttery blond, Violets, wild and willful,” just wow how descriptive you are with your words, they evoke senses of the reader in sheer eloquence. This definitely is a fave for me, your way with painting imagery blows me away every time!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 1/4/2024 1:41:00 PM
This is so well described I can smell the bark chips, the moist soil and the greenery around! Amazing work!! Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:39:00 PM
I loved this the first time I read it... the imagery of how you take the reader to where you are in that forest.... so amazing I had to award it first place, congratulations ...
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Date: 12/30/2023 9:44:00 AM
Oh Gina.. This enchanting poem evokes a serene and introspective journey through nature, painting a vivid picture of a forest sanctuary. The imagery of families of oaks, surrounded by pines and laurels, sets the stage for a tranquil experience where you have found solace and connection.
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