A Walk On the Sands

As the palm-trees
danced in the faint
ocean breeze, the sands
gently tickled my feet
as they quickly moved inland

The Sun accompanied 
with a sense of freedom,
made me feel as though
the Sun-rays were passing
through me, feeding my soul
with wonder and awe

Sparkling like diamonds
dancing to the tunes of a
magical wand, the skin of the
ocean glowed with Heavenly radiance
that blinded my eyes and
enchanted my mind at the same time

This was a moment not
even a myriad comets could
inspire me with such depth
as the whispers of the ocean
and the warm stare of the Sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/9/2016 8:36:00 AM
A great write I could picture everything so clearly, congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Seosamh!! :-)
Date: 7/8/2016 3:53:00 PM
A wonderful, descriptive write, Teddy! Congrats!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2016 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece, Kim!! *^_^*
Date: 7/8/2016 7:14:00 AM
What a great poem. It really takes me there. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Scott, for enjoying and applauding my work!! :-)
Date: 7/7/2016 5:10:00 PM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your win with this beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 2:57:00 PM
Hi BL. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
Date: 7/7/2016 1:37:00 PM
This is a dream of a poem.....I can almost feel the ocean breeze against my face ! Thank you for this little island paradise !! :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 2:54:00 PM
Welcome Carrie!! *^_^* You can always visit the island anytime you want, lol. It's only a few clicks away *_^
Date: 7/7/2016 1:36:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 2:50:00 PM
I'll sure do.... Thanks so much Linda, for your kind applause!! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 1/13/2016 11:13:00 PM
TEDDY, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/7/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and applause, Linda!! *^_^*
Date: 1/9/2016 7:58:00 AM
Such a lovely poem, Teddy. Congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest. Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/7/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind applause, Sandra!! :-)
Date: 1/9/2016 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/7/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Hans!! :-)
Date: 1/8/2016 7:42:00 PM
Teddy, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/7/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat, for your applause!! *^_^*
Date: 1/8/2016 4:58:00 AM
Really love this Teddy! Congrats on your win. From Jean
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Jean! ;-)
Date: 1/7/2016 1:46:00 PM
This is so beautiful Teddy! Congrats!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/8/2016 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Balveen! ;-)
Date: 7/5/2015 3:22:00 AM
Teddy, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2015 9:37:00 AM
Thank you for your applause Linda! *^_^*
Date: 7/4/2015 7:49:00 PM
Teddy :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2015 9:36:00 AM
You are always welcome Skat! ^_^ Thank you for your applause! *^_^*
Date: 8/24/2014 2:16:00 PM
Ahhh...the skin of the ocean glowed... Beautiful, Teddy. Congratulations.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/25/2014 3:58:00 AM
I really like using metaphors and artistic expressions. Thank you for your applause Faye! ^_^
Date: 8/23/2014 3:07:00 PM
Written by someone who loves summer and the ocean. delightful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/25/2014 3:16:00 AM
True, Joyce! I love both combination! Thank you very much for applause and reading me! ^_^
Date: 8/23/2014 6:44:00 AM
- Teddy ... I love the summer.. and your poem, congratulations on your winning in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/25/2014 3:14:00 AM
Thanks for your warm and kind applause Anne Lise; your morale support really means a lot to me! ^_^
Date: 8/22/2014 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations for a great win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/23/2014 6:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 8/20/2014 3:34:00 PM
Great imagery, Teddy! Cheers, Roy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/22/2014 4:37:00 AM
Thanks you very much Roy! :-)
Date: 8/20/2014 2:15:00 AM
I could almost feel the warm sun shining down on my face as I read your poem! You have captured a wonderful summer moment in these lines! Great work, Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/20/2014 6:52:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause Kelly! Enjoy the summer season! ^_^
Date: 8/19/2014 8:16:00 AM
This is truly a free verse gem. So smooth and with a clear message that just sings out loud!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/19/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, and reading me Robert! :-)
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