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date 9/2/25

A Walk in the Sunset

We saw the feathered edge of the sunset
and dreampt of an evening's wish to explore
Where the beating heart of our yearnings met
And invited romance at the seashore
Where time began to merge and reminisce
As white caps slowly furrowed the pebbled sand
The twilight revealed our heart's eagerness
When we walked together, warm hand in hand
Imagined dreams beneath a star-lit night
And basked in the glorious firmament
Where waves were dressed in white from the moonlight
and sounds from the sea whispered enchantment
As we came to capture Saint Elmo's Fire
That was glowing deep inside our desire
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September 1, 2025 at 4:50 PM
what a romantic ballad, Frederick. I love the reference to St. Elmo's Fire. Your imagery was captivating...well done, sir! wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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