Emile Pinet Poet Blank verse

A Walk In the Park

Walking barefoot in the park
on a carpet of green grass;
Nature's cool, dewy fingers
massage and tickle my toes.

A brisk tactile breeze tussles
my unruly mop of hair;
sending a shiver running
along the length of my spine.

Soaking up rays, I bathe in
warm sunlight, treating my skin
to its therapeutic touch;
bringing a blush to my cheeks.

And the roughened bark of an
accommodating shade-tree
scratches a persistent itch;
as it rubs my grateful back.

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Skat A September 8, 2015 at 9:09 AM Emile, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT** Emile Pinet September 8, 2015 at 9:50 AM Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2015 at 8:59 PM this is amazing!! You get an A+ for doing exactly what Nette asked. BIG congrats. Emile Pinet September 8, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thanks so much Andrea, your visits and comments are always most appreciated. Emile.

James Inman September 7, 2015 at 9:15 AM Beautiful images, Emile. I feel your poem. Emile Pinet September 7, 2015 at 1:45 PM Thanks James, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.

Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 7:45 PM Fabulous write, Emile, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve Emile Pinet September 7, 2015 at 9:13 AM Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome. Emile.

Jill Spagnola September 6, 2015 at 12:41 PM I just love when a poet has the skills to put me there! awesome :), jill Emile Pinet September 6, 2015 at 4:26 PM Thanks jill, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

Nette Onclaud September 6, 2015 at 12:06 PM i feel like being cuddled by the grass and nature in the park...truly a well deserved win, emile.. thanks for supporting my contest and happy congrats! Emile Pinet September 6, 2015 at 4:27 PM Thanks for your kind words Nette, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest with such talented poets, Emile.

Joseph May September 6, 2015 at 10:33 AM A fine write and win ...Congrats Emile Pinet September 6, 2015 at 11:00 AM Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 6, 2015 at 7:45 AM Amazingly beautiful Emile! Congrats on superb win ! Emile Pinet September 6, 2015 at 8:40 AM Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.

Noel Villarosa September 2, 2015 at 3:03 AM Beautiful poem, a perfect interaction with nature. A natural way to relax. (^_^) Noel. Emile Pinet September 2, 2015 at 8:01 AM Thanks Noel, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

Josefina Costales August 31, 2015 at 8:13 AM contest or not, as it stands the poem creates lighthearted imageries awaking the "sense of touch". Emile Pinet August 31, 2015 at 3:03 PM Thank you Josefina, what a nice thing to say. Emile.

Lindsay Laurie August 30, 2015 at 7:20 PM A nice relaxing image you have written Emile - Lindsay Emile Pinet August 31, 2015 at 7:57 AM Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate it. Emile.

Alexis Y. August 30, 2015 at 2:10 PM Emile, this is a beautiful and engaging piece. Great imagey. Walking barefoot in the park on a day like you described is just wonderful. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis Emile Pinet August 30, 2015 at 4:53 PM Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

Jan Allison August 30, 2015 at 2:07 PM what fabulous imagery from start to finish Emile - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison August 30, 2015 at 4:59 PM Have just noticed .... he guy in the pic has VERY weird long toes lol:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet August 30, 2015 at 4:52 PM Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your wonderful comments. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2015 at 1:21 PM - I love to walk barefoot in the dew wet grass - A lovely piece, Emile - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Emile Pinet August 30, 2015 at 2:00 PM Thanks so much Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments. Emile.