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warm dappled sunlight flickers like a blazing fire autumn has arrived 5.7.5 checked with how many syllables Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 06/14/21

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 6/20/2021 7:10:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win. Carol Louise

Jesse Rowe

Date: 6/20/2021 6:08:00 PM

Even without the photo, I can see this forest. Great poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2021 11:07:00 AM

and it's a WIN. Congrats, Jan!!

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/18/2021 11:14:00 PM

Hard to choose between the poem and the pic really, congrats for a win

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM

Thanks so much :-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2021 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...........

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/18/2021 6:54:00 AM

Jan, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/18/2021 1:41:00 AM

Breathtakingly beautiful Jan!!! Congratulations! This is a fav for me!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks so much JCB -) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/17/2021 11:29:00 AM

How whimsical, beautiful - the whole forest looks alight with blazing fires - what a perfect description of Autumn. Good luck in the contest. Had an emergency op, my two arteries on my one foot blocked and I had to have an angioplastic - had to go through my groin. Recuperating with my poetry and computer on my lap. Hubby is the best nurse ever! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings,

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM

oh Jennifer so sorry to hear of your health issues I hope you are on the road to recovery:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 6/17/2021 5:38:00 AM

Jan, beautiful haiku and perfect picture to match it. ~ Warren

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 6/17/2021 1:59:00 AM

Smashing depiction, Jan. Good luck in Line’s contest. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/16/2021 7:05:00 AM

cool work

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Doris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 6/15/2021 3:54:00 PM

Beautiful Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2021 2:22:00 PM

this is gorgerous work, Jan. Hope it's a win for you.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/15/2021 2:15:00 PM

'warm dappled sunlight' how evocative, shines like a little jewel!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Michelle I love seeing the sun glint through the trees:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/15/2021 11:17:00 AM

WELL done, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2021 6:12:00 AM

Lovely haiku and lovely picture. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mchattie

Date: 6/14/2021 4:44:00 PM

Too soon. I hope summer lasts forever. I don't want to even think about fall. If anyone posts a poem about winter... I will hunt them down. Nevertheless... well penned my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2021 10:36:00 AM

Thanks David, i think we have had our 2 days of summer lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2021 3:50:00 PM

WoW! Jan, This is gorgeous. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2021 4:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/14/2021 3:12:00 PM

What imagery and wording Jan, each complimenting the other, please let me have a summer first, hopefully it shows up this year, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2021 3:22:00 PM

thanks David, we have had dull cloudy weather whilst the uk has basked in sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM

a beautiful autumn poem, jan! can't wait for it to return! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2021 12:39:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, do pop by my poem from yesterday I think its my favourite this month so far:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/14/2021 12:33:00 PM

You discribed the autumn sunlight perfectly Jan, I know I shouldn't complain but im looking forward to autumn already. Hope you're keeping cool with the heat. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM

We haven't had summer here much lot we dont tend to get the extremes of temperature experienced in the uk the last few days have been dull and overcast!:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2021 12:28:00 PM

Perfectly articulated with such visual joy Jan! Delightful! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2021 12:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Sam:-) hug Jan xx