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warm dappled sunlight flickers like a blazing fire autumn has arrived 5.7.5 checked with how many syllables Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 06/14/21

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Date: 6/20/2021 7:10:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win. Carol Louise
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Date: 6/20/2021 6:08:00 PM
Even without the photo, I can see this forest. Great poem.
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Date: 6/20/2021 11:07:00 AM
and it's a WIN. Congrats, Jan!!
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:14:00 PM
Hard to choose between the poem and the pic really, congrats for a win
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thanks so much :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/18/2021 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...........
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/18/2021 6:54:00 AM
Jan, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/18/2021 1:41:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful Jan!!! Congratulations! This is a fav for me!
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thanks so much JCB -) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2021 11:29:00 AM
How whimsical, beautiful - the whole forest looks alight with blazing fires - what a perfect description of Autumn. Good luck in the contest. Had an emergency op, my two arteries on my one foot blocked and I had to have an angioplastic - had to go through my groin. Recuperating with my poetry and computer on my lap. Hubby is the best nurse ever! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings,
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM
oh Jennifer so sorry to hear of your health issues I hope you are on the road to recovery:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2021 5:38:00 AM
Jan, beautiful haiku and perfect picture to match it. ~ Warren
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2021 3:20:00 AM
Cool, jan Good luck Pangie. Xx
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Pangie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2021 1:59:00 AM
Smashing depiction, Jan. Good luck in Line’s contest. Terry
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2021 7:05:00 AM
cool work
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Doris:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/15/2021 3:54:00 PM
Beautiful Jan.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/15/2021 2:22:00 PM
this is gorgerous work, Jan. Hope it's a win for you.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/15/2021 2:15:00 PM
'warm dappled sunlight' how evocative, shines like a little jewel!
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Michelle I love seeing the sun glint through the trees:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/15/2021 11:17:00 AM
WELL done, Jan!
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/15/2021 6:12:00 AM
Lovely haiku and lovely picture. Hugs.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 4:44:00 PM
Too soon. I hope summer lasts forever. I don't want to even think about fall. If anyone posts a poem about winter... I will hunt them down. Nevertheless... well penned my friend.
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks David, i think we have had our 2 days of summer lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 3:50:00 PM
WoW! Jan, This is gorgeous. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 3:12:00 PM
What imagery and wording Jan, each complimenting the other, please let me have a summer first, hopefully it shows up this year, cheers David
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:22:00 PM
thanks David, we have had dull cloudy weather whilst the uk has basked in sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM
a beautiful autumn poem, jan! can't wait for it to return! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 6/14/2021 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Ilene, do pop by my poem from yesterday I think its my favourite this month so far:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 12:33:00 PM
You discribed the autumn sunlight perfectly Jan, I know I shouldn't complain but im looking forward to autumn already. Hope you're keeping cool with the heat. Tom
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Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM
We haven't had summer here much lot we dont tend to get the extremes of temperature experienced in the uk the last few days have been dull and overcast!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/14/2021 12:28:00 PM
Perfectly articulated with such visual joy Jan! Delightful! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs :D
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Date: 6/14/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam:-) hug Jan xx