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A Walk In the Forest

warm dappled sunlight
flickers like a blazing fire
autumn has arrived 


5.7.5 checked with how many syllables 

Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest

sponsored by Line Gauthier

06/14/21

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Jesse Rowe Date: 6/20/2021 6:08:00 PM Even without the photo, I can see this forest. Great poem. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/20/2021 11:07:00 AM and it's a WIN. Congrats, Jan!! Login to Reply

Aniruddha Pathak Date: 6/18/2021 11:14:00 PM Hard to choose between the poem and the pic really, congrats for a win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM Thanks so much :-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/18/2021 9:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings........... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:26:00 PM Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/18/2021 6:54:00 AM Jan, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

JCB Brul Date: 6/18/2021 1:41:00 AM Breathtakingly beautiful Jan!!! Congratulations! This is a fav for me! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM Thanks so much JCB -) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 6/17/2021 11:29:00 AM How whimsical, beautiful - the whole forest looks alight with blazing fires - what a perfect description of Autumn. Good luck in the contest. Had an emergency op, my two arteries on my one foot blocked and I had to have an angioplastic - had to go through my groin. Recuperating with my poetry and computer on my lap. Hubby is the best nurse ever! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings, Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:25:00 PM oh Jennifer so sorry to hear of your health issues I hope you are on the road to recovery:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll Date: 6/17/2021 5:38:00 AM Jan, beautiful haiku and perfect picture to match it. ~ Warren Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood Date: 6/17/2021 1:59:00 AM Smashing depiction, Jan. Good luck in Line’s contest. Terry Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM Thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/16/2021 7:05:00 AM cool work Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM Thanks Doris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 6/15/2021 3:54:00 PM Beautiful Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:19:00 PM Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/15/2021 2:22:00 PM this is gorgerous work, Jan. Hope it's a win for you. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:18:00 PM Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 6/15/2021 2:15:00 PM 'warm dappled sunlight' how evocative, shines like a little jewel! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:11:00 PM Thanks Michelle I love seeing the sun glint through the trees:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 6/15/2021 11:17:00 AM WELL done, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/15/2021 6:12:00 AM Lovely haiku and lovely picture. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:10:00 PM Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mchattie Date: 6/14/2021 4:44:00 PM Too soon. I hope summer lasts forever. I don't want to even think about fall. If anyone posts a poem about winter... I will hunt them down. Nevertheless... well penned my friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/15/2021 10:36:00 AM Thanks David, i think we have had our 2 days of summer lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 6/14/2021 3:50:00 PM WoW! Jan, This is gorgeous. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/14/2021 4:09:00 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh Date: 6/14/2021 3:12:00 PM What imagery and wording Jan, each complimenting the other, please let me have a summer first, hopefully it shows up this year, cheers David Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/14/2021 3:22:00 PM thanks David, we have had dull cloudy weather whilst the uk has basked in sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM a beautiful autumn poem, jan! can't wait for it to return! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/14/2021 12:39:00 PM Thanks Ilene, do pop by my poem from yesterday I think its my favourite this month so far:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/14/2021 12:33:00 PM You discribed the autumn sunlight perfectly Jan, I know I shouldn't complain but im looking forward to autumn already. Hope you're keeping cool with the heat. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/14/2021 12:35:00 PM We haven't had summer here much lot we dont tend to get the extremes of temperature experienced in the uk the last few days have been dull and overcast!:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/14/2021 12:28:00 PM Perfectly articulated with such visual joy Jan! Delightful! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs :D Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/14/2021 12:34:00 PM Thanks so much Sam:-) hug Jan xx