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Dawn creeps above the dark horizon. Am I locked in a hazy dream? An icy chill grips my whole body, My legs falter in their purpose, Can I turn back? Can I delete This horrendous nightmarish dream? And then, as suddenly as it all began I see a single moonlight ray That filtered through the trees above. The rivers beckon still, but you are here And sobbing, I fall into your most tender arms. Your fragrant perfume is like honeydew, Like a scented breeze that permeates my breath, Saturating my lost mad soul with sanity. Suddenly, a warm dulcet haze enveloped me. Slowly, slowly I turn back, Slowly, I re-enter my cold bed, And all my nightmares are dispersed. At last, I rest in peace.

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Date: 1/14/2025 10:04:00 AM
So creative Victor and I love the ending. Your words are always full of tenderness and heartfelt emotion my friend. Hope you are doing well. God bless you...
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Date: 1/13/2025 2:15:00 PM
Beautifully written, I enjoyed the read, Victor. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2025 1:27:00 PM
Cold scene. Romantic poem. Nicely done my friend
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Date: 1/12/2025 2:31:00 PM
Your poetry is so well written. Nightmares are horrible, it is a blessing when the nightmare fades, and blissful sleep leads us into peaceful and magical dreams. I'm glad you were able to go on with a restful night in peaceful slumber.
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Date: 1/12/2025 12:03:00 PM
Wow, what vivid images you use in this poem. Nicely written!
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Date: 1/12/2025 5:26:00 AM
It’s good that nightmare's quickly disappear and we forget the fear. A wonderful poem and picture Victor… Beryl
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Date: 1/12/2025 3:48:00 AM
Yes, sweet rest. Still as the beauty of the wind who sings her song to those who just need to a breath of hope. Glorious and glowing with light - softly playing on the shadows of night. God bless you always Victor. Much love, Gina
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Date: 1/11/2025 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful -sounds like she visited you? Or at least lying in bed with you - enjoyed this write
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Date: 1/11/2025 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful, Victor
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Date: 1/11/2025 6:14:00 AM
Beautiful and powerful poem. Well written :)
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Date: 1/11/2025 5:41:00 AM
beautifully written, i don't like nightmares, day which follow is difficult to manage, what a great reading , thanks victor ooppss
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Date: 1/10/2025 7:34:00 PM
A momentary experience is beautifully recorded. Sleep can escort us to a world of dreams, sometimes nightmarish, sometimes sweetly pleasant. However at the end, you pass from a nightmarish dream to pleasant sleep and rest. Lovely poem, dear Victor.
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Date: 1/10/2025 2:48:00 PM
Honeydew is the scent of your lovely perfume—nightmare insanity. This lovely tale of sunrise tells the story of an ordeal that turns into blissful dreams.
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Date: 1/10/2025 2:11:00 PM
Your fragrant perfume is like honeydew…madness by nightmare. Hugs
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Date: 1/10/2025 11:54:00 AM
A nightmare is replaced with sweet dreams, in this beautiful tale of sunrise. An engrossing story, Victor. :)
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Date: 1/10/2025 8:52:00 AM
A ray of light brings the hope of warmth, Ver nicely penned Victor
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Date: 1/10/2025 5:37:00 AM
Those nightmares leave you shaken even when you wake up thankfully I haven't had one for a few years now, I try and avoid eating and drinking a few hours before I go to bed. Enjoy your weekend Victor. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2025 4:24:00 AM
- A beautiful and moving poem, Victor - Have a lovely weekend, my friend (without nightmares) - hugs
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Date: 1/10/2025 3:26:00 AM
This is so moving and how youv painted imagery in such a detailed manner is truly captivating and soul stirring dear victor! What a most heartfelt poem this is! Absolutely love the flow and rhythm of your lines and the picture youv used and the ending is so touching too! Pleasure always reading your poems. Sending you light always.
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