A Vultures Paradise

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justice no longer holds the scales of truth i wrote this reading of high level corruption

When the cookie crumbles and people begin to pick up the crumbs we all know the difference between our big toe and little one innocence Opening their eyes from blindness a little piece by piece of our democracy is being eroded and removed narrow minded points of views stage Factual For the good living folk to express seriously Trying to teach their children right from wrong living They twist words and agendas to suit liberal balance and overturn the view's of truth making them wrong discrimination of fact Scales of Isis before she holds the cup of the twelve jewels heaven ward's begging bowl behold Tipping one-sided hoping to buy a piece of heaven with riches stolen speaks for itself

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/21/2017 12:26:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely a mess, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.The Bible is very clear about all these n' more in the future.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^