A Visitor Came Into My Life

A visitor came into my life 
Bringing pain and ecstasy
For every day of joy she brought  
There were two of  misery 

She baked twelve dozen cookies 
Then promptly gave them to her friends 
Fixed my motorcycle 
But wrecked my Mercedes’ Benz 

She never told me what her name was 
Though she stayed here for a year 
Claimed to be a stylist
Then cut off half my ear 

She said she wanted children 
But none of them with me  
Introduced me to her mother
Who was three years younger than she 

She told me she could cook 
But I very quickly learned 
She could barely boil water 
And even that was often burned 

We enjoyed watching TV shows 
Though she always held the remote 
Whenever we had different views 
She wouldn’t count my vote 

It’s not that I was happy 
To see her on her way 
But now though twelve years later 
I still celebrate that day

Forgive me for such a simple poem 
which is neither accurate or true 
But I do hope that you’re laughing 
because I wrote it just for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/9/2023 1:49:00 PM
Great pen Darrell, really enjoyable and fun filled piece. Great stuff, happy Easter, Gordon
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Darrell Rose
Date: 4/10/2023 3:29:00 PM
Hello Gordon ! Thank you for the kind words, I’m thrilled you found the piece enjoyable. It was indeed a humorous little write. Have a great day ! Darrell
Date: 4/6/2023 7:10:00 PM
Hahaha! Mission accomplished :)
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Darrell Rose
Date: 4/7/2023 8:30:00 AM
Hahaha I’m glad it made you laugh ! Have a great day. Darrell
Date: 4/6/2023 1:40:00 PM
this is delightful, darrell! i enjoyed...
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Date: 4/6/2023 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words. It was a fun little write , I’m glad you laughed ! Have a great day! Darrell
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