Peter W Iversen Poet Free verse

A Visit With the Rock Man

I complain about...
Faster, cheaper
Good enough is good enough
Almost right is great
More is better
16 oz. now 12
Large, big, jumbo
Everyone gets a trophy
Everything on demand
.0 t0 60 in 3
The Rock Man said relax,
rocks melt very slowly.

The Rock Man is a cool, laid back, character in  the 1971 animated film'The Point'

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Constance La France November 29, 2021 at 1:34 PM Peter, congratulations on your placement in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Peter W Iversen November 30, 2021 at 7:24 AM Thank you Constance. Peter

Ann Foster January 1, 2020 at 9:20 PM excellent and true... well worded... well written. Ann Peter W Iversen January 5, 2020 at 2:51 PM Thanks for the read & comment Ann. Peter