A Visit To Heaven

Suddenly, I find myself in a strange surrounding.
What I’m seeing defies an accurate describing.
I see faces of my relatives I used to know.
However, they have all passed on many years ago.
Some of them I know only from pictures I have seen.
I know this isn’t possible; it’s such a strange scene.
They’re seated at a table saying “Hello” to me.
Why am I here?  I know this can’t be reality!
Is Rod Serling somewhere near in this vicinity?

My great-grandfather sits at the head of the table.
Asking me, “Are you hearing me son; are you able?
I’m pleased to let you know you will be joining us soon.
We will be calling for you soon after the full moon.
Don’t worry son, I understand that you have some fear.
We all love you, and we know that you will like it here.
Make the most of your time while you are still on the earth.
You have possessed the potential ever since your birth.
Love your family, and attend to their every need.
They will return their love, and this advice you will heed”.
You will return to earth and do this.  Have we agreed?”

This was just too much for me as I fell out of bed.
I wound up on the floor, and got up shaking my head.
I thought, “That certainly showed to be an oddity!
I’m not sure if that was a dream or reality!”

Robert Pettit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bombardieri Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 8:34 PM
First place!!! yay Robert:) CONGRATS TO YOU!!
Eastman Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Good write. Congratulation on the win. Loved this one, greatly.
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:49 PM
Good job, Robert. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Arowolo Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 4:58 PM
Fine and awesome write,Robert.Congratulations on your well deserved win....
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on the win of your poem in Linda-Marie's "Life And Death...And Beyond" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 7:31 PM
whether this be fantasy or reality, the whole fascinated me.. congrats; so fine, robert!
Richards Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 6:35 PM
What a wonderful piece you did for this contest, Robert! But such amazing and wonderful advice in this dream!! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 4:18 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON FIRST PLACE WIN FOR AN EXCITING ADVENTURE INTO THE BEYOND ...
Johnson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations Robert on your success in my contest. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Robert. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:40 AM
A big congratulations on your win Robert. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:49 AM
What a very intriguing poem, Robert and I think I would also wonder myself whether it was a dream of reality-- Congrats on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:46 AM
Congrats Robert on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write .. an amazing poem.. so happy to be sharing the winners circle with one of the very best my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Onclaud Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:06 AM
well.. heavenly, robert! cheesr for the super win..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:38 PM
And of course it is going to happen for you and for everyone. Something actually to look forward to and yet we all seem to fear death so much. Congratulations, Robert. I enjoyed the read!
Hardy Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 1:00 PM
very good, you have the perfect imagination to be a wonderful author
Neels Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Quite an intriguing visit to the over side Robert.. Had to laugh at your first line of the last stanza... enjoyed this :)
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