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A Visit From the Plumfiggians

I was visited by brothers Zog and Ziggy Who landed from planet Plumfiggy They were attracted by my Christmas lights Both joined in when we had snowball fights Zog and Ziggy were young alien twins both had lime green and purple tinged skins On the top of their tiny marshmallow heads they had dreadlocks which hung down like threads Ziggy's eyes were of pure emerald green and Zog’s eyes had a weird rainbow sheen when we met I shook all their four arms these odd hugs really enhanced their charms Plumfiggians don’t sleep but chill out instead at night time they would rest in my shed I found them both hanging down from a rafter this behaviour caused loud peals of laughter Zog is quite plump, Ziggy's much thinner I pureed them a Christmas dinner They gave me a present of figgy joos it tasted vile, a drink I'd never choose! They found it cold so I'd made each a jumper with four sleeves to knit my task was quite bumper My guests stayed indoors until it was dark Then we'd visit the children's play park Ziggy loved playing on the big swings In Plumfiggy they don’t have such things Their planet is just twelve light years away At Plumfiggy fest I'd be welcome to stay 208 words Fantasy with fictional beings Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 12/01/20

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Date: 1/4/2021 8:32:00 AM
Hi Jan, I'm not surprised that you did so well in the contest. Congratulations, my friend. Happy New Year:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/4/2021 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Great/Wonderful" another win with this cute and funny write. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.................
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Date: 1/4/2021 6:22:00 AM
Ha, ha. A lovely flight of imagination, Jan. Congratulations with your win. // Barry.
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Date: 1/4/2021 12:12:00 AM
It feels like a long time ago I first read this gem. Well, big congrats for your first place - well deserved for such unbounded creativity, Jan! Hugs ~ john
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations Jan, a well deserved win with this awesome Plumfiggy poem/story :-) hugs Belle xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2021 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win, Jan, great creative poem. Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2021 1:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve I was so delighted with this poem when i wrote it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations for your POTW. ~~
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Victor now the mock exams have finished and I am not working Im hoping to be more active on the site:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 5:56:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTW :) Love it. God bless you sweet lady
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Date: 12/8/2020 10:06:00 AM
Thanks regina :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/7/2020 6:32:00 PM
Jan, your fantastic imagination delights my whimsical imagination! Your playful and vivid imagery is so endearing.. Congratulations for your wonderful recognition with POTW honors. Such a worthy choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/8/2020 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/7/2020 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTW win. So cute and funny. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 3:40:00 PM
thanks Paula I am so thrilled about potw especially as i have not been so active on the site in the last couple of days with work commitments:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/7/2020 7:52:00 AM
Jan, wow and wow again, your story is delightful and a winner for me, and congratulations on receiving POTW, with this ever so creative story poem _Constance
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 1:02:00 PM
Thanks Constance:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 1:57:00 PM
This is delightful Jan and I can see why it was honored with POTW! Big congratulations my friend. You are a terrific story teller. Happy Holidays. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 1:48:00 PM
Have you been watching too much of alien shows? :) great fantasy story and congratulations on POTW... hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 12:54:00 PM
lol I am not a big sci fi fan - well i do like star trek but not seen it in the longest time:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 10:51:00 AM
Jan, this is so beyond imaginative, this is out of this world! Big congratulations for being chosen POTW, your delightful humor and storytelling are well worthy of the honor. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:47:00 PM
Yay, a sequel!
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:44:00 PM
aww thanks John I am going to work on another poem with the next adventure for zog and ziggy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 10:47:00 AM
Jan, a fun and creative one! Congratulations on POTW! hugs
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. I got some good laughs out of your poem.
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thanks L Milton:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 8:31:00 AM
Very amusing and so well written Jan, congratulations on poem of the week... Belle
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 7:09:00 AM
So much fun and worthy of the honour. Congrats on POTW. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Rick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 6:38:00 AM
Look at you go! Awesome choice for POTW!! Congrats my friend!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Mark i will be working on more adventures for zog and ziggy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 6:28:00 AM
WoW! Jan, I am thrilled that you got such an honor with this clever and creative piece. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 5:47:00 AM
WOW! This is brilliant creativity. BIG congrats Jan, on POTW.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 4:55:00 AM
I am plum crazy about your visit from aliens in Plumfiggy. Congratulations on POTW, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 10:35:00 AM
what a super comment thanks jenna:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/6/2020 2:42:00 AM
Missed this gem Jan, well written fantasy, congrats on POTW. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
thanks Tom it was fun to write when I was at school last week:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/3/2020 6:49:00 AM
Hi Jan, a few nice illustrations along with the poem, would make a great children’s educational story book, great color and imagery, also flows very easy, best of luck in contest, cheers David
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thanks David I would love to get into print one day with my silly poems:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/3/2020 4:42:00 AM
That was awesome!! You have quite the vivid imagination Jan! Well done my friend!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 10:12:00 AM
I amaze myself lol:-) hugs jan xx
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