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icy white frosting glistens on my once green grass ... winter has arrived slippery pavements must be careful when walking... sister Susie falls 11/18/19

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Date: 12/15/2019 2:36:00 PM
frost is pretty to see but not to walk on!! Nice ones, but I am seeing it was from november. Gosh, I miss you, Jan. Alexis sends love as well, and we want to see you a lot more here like before!
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Date: 11/27/2019 6:30:00 PM
'white frosting' - how descriptive - yes, I hope you are careful, Jan, I have fallen on ice (it is more embarrassing than painful!)
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:42:00 AM
Very well-done, Jan! Janice
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Date: 11/24/2019 4:26:00 PM
Ouch! Hope Sister Susie is OK! 'Tis the season to be careful! Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 11/21/2019 8:37:00 PM
I had my house on the market and was hoping to be in the south this winter, therefore avoiding frost and snow and cold. I didn't sell my house. Reading this now was perfect timing.
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Date: 11/20/2019 4:43:00 PM
Nice one Jan indeed Mr frost is now in his season so we all need to beware. Remember the Christmas movie of the same name, one of my favs. Hope all well with you, Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 11/19/2019 5:22:00 PM
Yes indeed the winter is upon us dear Jan, we need to be more careful. Nice poetry , hope all is well Sending you a hug and a smile
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Date: 11/19/2019 12:19:00 PM
Very nice short poems about the winter! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/19/2019 11:46:00 AM
Jan love your haiku's. We have tons of snow and ice in my city in Canada. We are winter though it is not officially winter yet!
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Date: 11/18/2019 11:36:00 PM
Lovely, Jan... God bless you, Gina
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Date: 11/18/2019 11:07:00 PM
oh, slipper when iced over, a dance not wanted on the dance card. Good one, my friend... Hugs sweet lady
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Date: 11/18/2019 4:03:00 PM
Just warn your husband to be careful where he puts his tongue! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:33:00 PM
It is still FALL, I think. : ) Nicely done Jan
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Date: 11/18/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Be careful ... Jan, can fall too - We had several days of slippery roads two weeks ago - Great haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:24:00 PM
Its getting icy, winter is tightening her grip, stay safe Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/18/2019 11:25:00 AM
Hi Jan. Jack can be a beast and doesnt care of your demise. Thanks for sharing this
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Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM
thanks Gregory:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/18/2019 11:22:00 AM
Be careful, i don't like the icy paths but you made it come to life Jan
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Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM
thanks TS:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/18/2019 9:12:00 AM
Safer to stay indoors, Jan. Personally I'm planning my hibernation.
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Date: 11/18/2019 11:14:00 AM
What a good idea Line, wrap up warm and write your lovely poetry:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/18/2019 8:33:00 AM
Brrr a grim reminder that winter is about to tighten its grip. Came a cropper many a time, well described Jan. Tom
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:46:00 AM
It was so frosty this morning ... I walked to see mum then to a funeral - been an odd sort of a day. So glad you are back posting:-) hugs Jan xx