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icy white frosting
glistens on my once green grass ...
winter has arrived

slippery pavements
must be careful when walking...
sister Susie falls

11/18/19

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/27/2019 6:30:00 PM

'white frosting' - how descriptive - yes, I hope you are careful, Jan, I have fallen on ice (it is more embarrassing than painful!)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/26/2019 8:42:00 AM

Very well-done, Jan! Janice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/24/2019 4:26:00 PM

Ouch! Hope Sister Susie is OK! 'Tis the season to be careful! Blessings, Gershon

Christine Bialczak

Date: 11/21/2019 8:37:00 PM

I had my house on the market and was hoping to be in the south this winter, therefore avoiding frost and snow and cold. I didn't sell my house. Reading this now was perfect timing.

Gordon McConnell

Date: 11/20/2019 4:43:00 PM

Nice one Jan indeed Mr frost is now in his season so we all need to beware. Remember the Christmas movie of the same name, one of my favs. Hope all well with you, Blessings,Gordon

Pixie Dust

Date: 11/19/2019 5:22:00 PM

Yes indeed the winter is upon us dear Jan, we need to be more careful. Nice poetry , hope all is well Sending you a hug and a smile

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2019 12:19:00 PM

Very nice short poems about the winter! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

Date: 11/19/2019 11:46:00 AM

Jan love your haiku's. We have tons of snow and ice in my city in Canada. We are winter though it is not officially winter yet!

Regina Riddle

Date: 11/18/2019 11:36:00 PM

Lovely, Jan... God bless you, Gina

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2019 11:07:00 PM

oh, slipper when iced over, a dance not wanted on the dance card. Good one, my friend... Hugs sweet lady

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/18/2019 4:03:00 PM

Just warn your husband to be careful where he puts his tongue! Aloha! Rico

natalyn hobbs

Date: 11/18/2019 3:45:00 PM

Oooh! I love this! Great job! Love the title too!

Chris Green

Date: 11/18/2019 3:33:00 PM

It is still FALL, I think. : ) Nicely done Jan

Sunshine Smile

Date: 11/18/2019 1:34:00 PM

- Be careful ... Jan, can fall too - We had several days of slippery roads two weeks ago - Great haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:24:00 PM

Its getting icy, winter is tightening her grip, stay safe Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/18/2019 11:53:00 AM

Don't remind me. I once fell in London on icy pavement. Hugs xxoo

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:23:00 PM

OUCH! Its very cold again tonight I usually walk with mum in the garden at the care home so she gets some fresh air but she is getting frail now so we stay indoors:-( hugs Jan xx

Gregory Paul

Date: 11/18/2019 11:25:00 AM

Hi Jan. Jack can be a beast and doesnt care of your demise. Thanks for sharing this

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM

thanks Gregory:-) hugs Jan xx

TS Poetry

Date: 11/18/2019 11:22:00 AM

Be careful, i don't like the icy paths but you made it come to life Jan

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM

thanks TS:-) hugs Jan xx

Teppo Gren

Date: 11/18/2019 9:58:00 AM

Very well expressed, Jan. The first days of winter are the worst until you remember to be careful with the slippery groud. T.J

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 11:15:00 AM

The grass was white this morning ... the slippy paths were poetic licence though as the sun was up and they were fine:-) hugs Jan xx lovely to see you back TJ:-) hugs Jan x

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2019 9:12:00 AM

Safer to stay indoors, Jan. Personally I'm planning my hibernation.

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 11:14:00 AM

What a good idea Line, wrap up warm and write your lovely poetry:-)hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/18/2019 8:33:00 AM

Brrr a grim reminder that winter is about to tighten its grip. Came a cropper many a time, well described Jan. Tom

JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 8:46:00 AM

It was so frosty this morning ... I walked to see mum then to a funeral - been an odd sort of a day. So glad you are back posting:-) hugs Jan xx

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