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A Visit From Jack Frost

icy white frosting
glistens on my once green grass ...
winter has arrived

slippery pavements
must be careful when walking...
sister Susie falls

11/18/19

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2019

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/15/2019 2:36:00 PM frost is pretty to see but not to walk on!! Nice ones, but I am seeing it was from november. Gosh, I miss you, Jan. Alexis sends love as well, and we want to see you a lot more here like before! Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 11/27/2019 6:30:00 PM 'white frosting' - how descriptive - yes, I hope you are careful, Jan, I have fallen on ice (it is more embarrassing than painful!) Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/26/2019 8:42:00 AM Very well-done, Jan! Janice Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/24/2019 4:26:00 PM Ouch! Hope Sister Susie is OK! 'Tis the season to be careful! Blessings, Gershon Login to Reply

Christine Bialczak Date: 11/21/2019 8:37:00 PM I had my house on the market and was hoping to be in the south this winter, therefore avoiding frost and snow and cold. I didn't sell my house. Reading this now was perfect timing. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 11/20/2019 4:43:00 PM Nice one Jan indeed Mr frost is now in his season so we all need to beware. Remember the Christmas movie of the same name, one of my favs. Hope all well with you, Blessings,Gordon Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 11/19/2019 5:22:00 PM Yes indeed the winter is upon us dear Jan, we need to be more careful. Nice poetry , hope all is well Sending you a hug and a smile Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/19/2019 12:19:00 PM Very nice short poems about the winter! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/19/2019 11:46:00 AM Jan love your haiku's. We have tons of snow and ice in my city in Canada. We are winter though it is not officially winter yet! Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/18/2019 11:36:00 PM Lovely, Jan... God bless you, Gina Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 11/18/2019 11:07:00 PM oh, slipper when iced over, a dance not wanted on the dance card. Good one, my friend... Hugs sweet lady Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 11/18/2019 4:03:00 PM Just warn your husband to be careful where he puts his tongue! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 11/18/2019 3:33:00 PM It is still FALL, I think. : ) Nicely done Jan Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/18/2019 1:34:00 PM - Be careful ... Jan, can fall too - We had several days of slippery roads two weeks ago - Great haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/18/2019 5:24:00 PM Its getting icy, winter is tightening her grip, stay safe Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Na Na Date: 11/18/2019 11:25:00 AM Hi Jan. Jack can be a beast and doesnt care of your demise. Thanks for sharing this Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM thanks Gregory:-) hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry Date: 11/18/2019 11:22:00 AM Be careful, i don't like the icy paths but you made it come to life Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/18/2019 5:22:00 PM thanks TS:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 11/18/2019 9:12:00 AM Safer to stay indoors, Jan. Personally I'm planning my hibernation. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/18/2019 11:14:00 AM What a good idea Line, wrap up warm and write your lovely poetry:-)hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/18/2019 8:33:00 AM Brrr a grim reminder that winter is about to tighten its grip. Came a cropper many a time, well described Jan. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/18/2019 8:46:00 AM It was so frosty this morning ... I walked to see mum then to a funeral - been an odd sort of a day. So glad you are back posting:-) hugs Jan xx