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A Visit

The grandkids paid a visit On the day of Christmas Eve. The city’s fairly empty then, On holiday reprieve. We double-parked at daddy’s work; They saw his office space And then we drove to where we live, Our New York City place. We got a spot – a miracle! In front of our front door Then spent some time inside Which they were dying to explore. Some games, some lunch and then a walk, The river quite a hit And then the playground, which for them Was just a perfect fit. Hot cocoa back at Nana’s And a bit more time to play Before we headed suburb-bound To end this lovely day. We brought them home to mom and dad Like cupcakes freshly frosted, Then turned back to Manhattan Feeling happy but exhausted!

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Date: 1/6/2019 10:34:00 AM
You constantly amaze me by your "story" poems. I'm never distracted by mistakes in spelling or syllables or rhyme. Frosted/exhausted is like, I don't know, just perfect!!! Well done!...80)
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Date: 12/26/2018 10:27:00 PM
This is really nice, Ilene: 'like cupcakes freshly frosted.' THAT was perhaps the 'adorablest' line of the year... This wonderful poem is especially great for me, as I have been in the places you describe by the river, and can really feel it. Thanks for posting it. So enjoyable! Happiness to you! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/25/2018 4:15:00 AM
What a lovely day you had with your children, Ilene. There is so much to see in New York that one could spend a week there and only scratch the surface. And I bet Nana was glad to see them too! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/25/2018 3:03:00 AM
aww Ilene I do love reading your charming poems about your lovely grandchildren, Have a wonderful day today:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2018 8:51:00 PM
Father Christmas is sure to add you to his GOOD list for this one! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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