William J. Jr. Atfield Poet Rhyme

A Vision

A Vision

A beautiful Lady, strolls along a beach, all alone.
Within her vivid imagination, I find what is in store.
A beautiful image emerges, it’s essence in a stone
lying upon the sandy edge of the oceans shore.

Mother hoods gorgeous door, seeing heaven, doth moan
under waves lapping, caressing hands touching ever more,
all that woman means to this expanding universe.
Ecstasy felt, passion expressed in every poetic verse

as waves mount, a crescendo reaching its peak,
then those hands, that brought ecstasy, seek
out the meaning of true and passionate love
from universal consciousness - the heavens above

From the above, might we understand woman ?
From her soul, will we get to understand man ?
From her position, this vision she doth know !
From her mouth, this vision, to me she did show.

B. J. “A ” 2
January 28th 2014

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Christine Phillips February 2, 2014 at 2:51 PM A very nice poem. I like the rhythm and message demonstrated in this poem. William J. Jr. Atfield February 4, 2014 at 12:13 PM My Dear Christine Phillips : Thank you for taking the time to express your feelings about Malgosia’s (,A Vission ), that I just had to take from her expressed thoughts and bring them to reality. And thak you for your “ A very nice poem. I like the rhythm and message demonstrated in this poem. ” which are great compliments that I am most grateful to have received. Thank you Christine . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )