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7/27/2024 for Eight Words 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

She's a vision in a gilt frame 'fore the weary man he became. He hears a sweet Spanish guitar. Slumber takes him to days afar. Through misty time, he hears his name. Butterflies cajole, "join the game". A Degas etching, she's the same. Lilacs in her hair - there they are. She's a vision. How straight and true was cupid's aim, when then, their love, they did proclaim. She was taken away so far. Does she live as a twinkling star? He sighed - mere dreams left of her flame. She's a vision.

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Date: 9/2/2024 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creative talent with us. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 9/2/2024 9:01:00 AM
Thanks and thanks for the compliment Sara!
Date: 8/28/2024 5:00:00 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/28/2024 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
Date: 8/27/2024 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win David, Very nicely penned
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David Crandall
Date: 8/27/2024 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Joseph. I loved the 8-word challenge!
Date: 7/28/2024 2:13:00 PM
This is a cute love poem. I like seeing an appearance by cupid.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/28/2024 2:18:00 PM
haha, thanks - he's a sharpshooter!

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