A Villanelle On the Villanelle - Revised

It has the ringing echo of a bell. The words at each line’s end must reconcile. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. Its quality is like a carousel. Jean Passaerat of France defined its style. It has the ringing echo of a bell. Divinity inside this form may dwell as one defines those things for him worthwhile. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. The message of this form one can foretell. Its poets are to litany servile. It has the ringing echo of a bell. And like the terza rima or rondel, this form through history has had its trial. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. This poetry, if it is authored well, can capture hearts and make the spirit smile. It has the ringing echo of a bell. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. For the Villanelle Poetry Contest of Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/11/2019 11:20:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. A brilliant take on the challenge. Love it. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:39:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations as well on your placement, a ringing endorsement!!!
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Date: 1/26/2019 5:49:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! SUPERB! Janice
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Date: 4/6/2014 5:07:00 AM
Nicely done! Congrats on your victory!!
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Date: 4/4/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hi Andrea...back to you. This is a great write; immensely enjoyed. // congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 4/3/2014 1:21:00 PM
Andrea, loving the poem... awesome to see you on this rhyme battle list... Linda
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:07:00 AM
hey i really like this beauty, Andrea, looking at poems you wrote, while i was resettling back in the uk,, will catch up later....
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Villanelle Me" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:13:00 PM
grin...a teaching verse so appropo! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congrats!!! Andrea so happy to see this win. loved this wonderful poem done on villanelle itself,today I finally got this much needed break to go through the winning poems,, so many contest results and I've just begun..really loving them all so much,,the classics and Chris' one so lovely..the night is long for me today...sending huggs...
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:29:00 AM
This is terrific and one of the best. Many congrats for this write Andrea.
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Date: 6/23/2011 3:21:00 PM
"how I love the lovely villanelle" ..that sounds so cool and fresh, doesn't it Andrea? makes one want to keep saying it. This take on this contest was ingenius. Very well done and congratulations to you. I have learned alot about the villanelle by reading all these great poems today and now I'm finally starting to "love the lovely villanelle..."
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:50:00 PM
Many congrats on your win in this contest too, Andrea : ) I never did get round to trying this form - I really must
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:17:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of catie, Andrea
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:41:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your excellent win in the contest with this creative poetic journey and awesome title too..luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:36:00 AM
Way to go, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved placement in Catie's contest. Well done, my friend. Hugs, Licia. xxx
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:30:00 PM
A lovely Villanelle you have penned. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 5/31/2011 10:14:00 PM
What a clever write of one of the most difficult forms. I'm seriously impressed. This is good poetry, Andrea. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. ^__^
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:34:00 AM
a very creative piece of work, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Clouds Bursting
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Date: 5/28/2011 3:21:00 AM
A fine piece on the beautiful attributes of a villanelle..it's echoing ringing like a bell...simply loved it..Best wishes for the contest Andrea. huggs, gautami
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Date: 5/26/2011 5:08:00 AM
Very well done. To avoid tedium you have to come up with the right lines...you have done so here in style! Well done, Andrea! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/25/2011 12:55:00 PM
This is a style that I have never tried. Great write as always Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:40:00 AM
This is a definition villanelle an oh so echoing of its purpose... like the terza rima or rondel...this poem is oh so swell! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:09:00 PM
Bells are ringing in me ears, a winning verse perchance appears, upon it do i dwell! Don Johnson i do remain, not Miami vice of acclaim, but im on the yu ing tube, brash n rash n sometimes rude, love Don http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJ05cdRHVDk&feature=related
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