A Vicarious Life

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Who would you like to be?

I live my life vicariously, 
Through everyone else’s eyes.
I live my life through every low 
And every one of the highs.

It began when I was a child, 
I’d live like batman every day.
Pretending I was by his side, 
Cutting and weaving as I play.

My teens, I was the movie star, 
Robert de Niro, an extreme survivor.
That’s when I was the skin head, Bickle, 
The paranoid vigilante Taxi Driver.

By my 20’s my kids success at
Debates and sports became my badge.
I was there to remind folks how proud I was, 
Cleaning and bandaging every scratch.

My 30’s I walked like the enigmatic Jack White, 
Of Detroit garage rock stance.
This phase didn’t last long though, 
Couldn’t play the guitar, or even dance.

Now my 40’s, I don’t need actors or musicians,
To show I’m a flamboyant musical fighter.
I just feign that I know how to scrawl like the bard,
Living vicariously through poetic writers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/11/2016 7:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..I especially like the last line..I wonder if I could do that???..Sara..Thanks for dropping by..
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Date: 5/11/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Sara :)
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