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I hope you enjoy this story, Poetry Soup friends. Things are hectic for me right now, so I will add the music and picture later. I will be absent from Poetry Soup for a brief spell. Blessings.

A Very Long Week

Solomon was born in exuberant springtime, and it was on a Monday. Proud parents were Gregory and Helen, when now became someday. They dwelt back in the good old days, in a house not far from town; But, near enough for work and fun. Like moon, when earth is around. Solomon was christened at Church of Our Lady, one joyful Tuesday; And he was three months old. It was a scenic month, of wild bouquet! As he grew, Solomon was popular, like fiery sunset's fuchsia distress. Butterflies and friends' kites floated, in admiral skies, of sweet success. Familiarity bore beloved faces of family. They visited under tree fronds. Having crossed the fields of afar. It was a leap year, of frogs in ponds! Solomon lived in the house of silence and sound, full of joys of living; Like shadows, dancing on the outskirts of sun, with hibiscuses, willing. Pearl moon shone like a lazy searchlight, on the street of satin nights; With golden, glistening, days of fascination, huge tree peonies in sight. Neon supernovas enriched jet twilight, as neighbors sat on their porch,' Ere nutmeg sun had fully gone down, at spicy dusk, carrying a torch. 'Voyage champagne' blooms floated away, on a sparkly sea of bubbly; As 'black star' gladioli dazzled noon, and tiffany waves tossed roughly. 'Apricot beauties' came with rainbows, and 'birds eyes' had good views; And 'winged everlastings' looked heavenly, like pink, clouds, on a cruise. Solomon was a man of deep faith, knowing life's days tell a rich story; Which will end on one destined, tearful day, only to begin again, in glory. When he became a man, he made watches, in mellow days so frenzied.  He fell madly in love, and got married, one happy day. It was Wednesday! He and Stella lived blissfully happy lives, like peach lilies, in gold sunshine. Solomon lived to be very old, like planting grapes, and pouring the wine. Sadly, sickness must visit us all, and one day Solomon became quite ill; And it happened on tumultuous Thursday, when sheep grazed on the hill. The next oblivious day, Solomon was worse, like remiss trouble, stalking; And it so happens, that was a Friday, when varicolored leaves were falling. When the variegated life cannot go on, there comes an expectant pause. On silent Saturday, alas, Solomon died, as when darkest night, withdraws. Solomon was buried on a Sunday. He'd known his story would soon end. Like joys and raptures unceasing, and new sights, just around the bend! 'Solomon Grundy, Born on a Monday, Christened on Tuesday, Married on Wednesday, Took ill on Thursday, Grew worse on Friday, Died on Saturday, Buried on Sunday. That was the end, Of Solomon Grundy.'

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Date: 9/9/2025 3:08:00 PM
You've given Solomon Grundy a life he never had. Kudos Evelyn for another nursery rhyme adventure
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/9/2025 7:35:00 PM
Tom, I've enjoyed reading your comment. Thank you sooo much. :)
Date: 9/1/2025 8:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery sense of joy wonder and peace reading your poem xxdavidscott
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2025 3:07:00 PM
Great Scott! Nice comment
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2025 1:48:00 PM
I appreciate your lovely comment so much, David. :)
Date: 8/28/2025 6:10:00 AM
While facts were presented in an upbeat fashion that included respect for all elements of his life, dignified prose & beautiful imagery, the conclusion lacked all respect/dignity and turned his life into a whimsical ditty for everyone's amusement. I've not seen you land a narrative there before, it was clever, and I sure didn't suspect it was coming. Know that your hope materialized, I enjoyed the read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/28/2025 3:15:00 PM
Many of the nursery rhymes that I've based my stories upon have dark origins, and Solomon Grundy is no exception. I remember signing the rhyme as a child. It was fun to think of so much happening in a week. I did want to bring faith love, and lightness into the tale. Thank you very much for your kind expressions. Hugs.:)
Date: 8/27/2025 8:41:00 PM
I like the poem. Solomon died but he lived a long time with so many events in between. Your description heightened the success of a life.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2025 9:53:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed reading this Hilda. Your words truly delight.
Date: 8/26/2025 3:57:00 AM
A lovely retreat, the theme of this fine verse, emerges with grace. This tale, Evelyn, brought me much delight.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2025 9:40:00 PM
Sincerest thanks to your thoughtful appreciation, my friend.
Date: 8/25/2025 2:23:00 PM
you always use sonorities and brilliant imagery, poetry that enchants my heart, a sad ending is so common, merci poet
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/25/2025 3:34:00 PM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your gracious words, Yann. :)
Date: 8/24/2025 10:25:00 AM
- Solomon had a colorful life... I really enjoyed reading his story, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/24/2025 11:54:00 AM
Thank you for making me feel just great, Anne-Lise. I'm wearing my happy face now. Have a wonderful day. :) hugs
Date: 8/23/2025 10:51:00 PM
First and foremost I hope all will be well with you. I'll keep you in my prayers. The ditty is a surprise but you did well. Poor Solomon. C'est la vie. Great rhyme.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/23/2025 11:17:00 PM
Oh, I'm quite alright, Victor. I just have a lot to do right now, so I have to take a break. I miss Poetry Soup already! I still laugh about your poem called, Weeping Waters. Best wishes, my friend.
Date: 8/23/2025 12:59:00 AM
Brilliant write Evelyn …..just love it especially the last stanza! Debx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/23/2025 9:25:00 PM
So glad, Deb. Heartfelt thanks. :)
Date: 8/23/2025 12:35:00 AM
I enjoyed the story very much Evelyn… Beryl
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/23/2025 9:21:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your warm comment, Beryl. :)
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