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A Very Limited Panorama

This is the story of William from Tampa While playing guitar on his parent's veranda A guitar string broke In his eye it did poke Known as Blind Willie with a limited panorama © Jack Ellison 2015

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Viv Wigley

Date: 9/16/2015 12:11:00 AM

More reason why I shall stick to playing the pandemonium. Nice fun write, Jack. Regards, Viv

Tim Smith

Date: 9/15/2015 4:26:00 PM

He now wears a patch on that sightless left eye...his other eye is weak and only looks to the sky....a pirate in disguise...always telling bad lies....his guitar playing days have now long passed him by

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 4:33:00 PM

Oh he can still play! He's actually very famous... surprised you haven't heard of him! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/15/2015 10:24:00 AM

The neighborhood witch says she can fix him... But can't say the barks worse than the bite for dear William... The last one she helped on a whim... ended up with 4 extra limbs and 3 eyes, my friend... Oh well, that's limbs helped when he did swim... In fact he got several swimming trophies! So everything turned out in the end.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 4:32:00 PM

Think we better check with Willie, though... sounds dicey!!! xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/15/2015 9:15:00 AM

Ouch! That's my biggest fear when I play the guitar! haha Very clever limerick! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 4:30:00 PM

So you're multi-talented! Though so... careful! Love, Jack xxx

Michael Tor

Date: 9/15/2015 6:40:00 AM

lol he will have to learn to play the drums now. lol nice write Jack

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 6:49:00 AM

Actually he had been playing guitar so long, he could play blindfolded! (so to speak!) Cheers, Jack