A Very Limited Panorama

This is the story of William from Tampa While playing guitar on his parent's veranda A guitar string broke In his eye it did poke Known as Blind Willie with a limited panorama © Jack Ellison 2015
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Wigley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 12:11 AM
More reason why I shall stick to playing the pandemonium. Nice fun write, Jack. Regards, Viv
Smith Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 4:26 PM
He now wears a patch on that sightless left eye...his other eye is weak and only looks to the sky....a pirate in disguise...always telling bad lies....his guitar playing days have now long passed him by
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Oh he can still play! He's actually very famous... surprised you haven't heard of him! LOL
Eastman Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:24 AM
The neighborhood witch says she can fix him... But can't say the barks worse than the bite for dear William... The last one she helped on a whim... ended up with 4 extra limbs and 3 eyes, my friend... Oh well, that's limbs helped when he did swim... In fact he got several swimming trophies! So everything turned out in the end.
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Think we better check with Willie, though... sounds dicey!!! xxx
Breidenthal Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Ouch! That's my biggest fear when I play the guitar! haha Very clever limerick! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 4:30 PM
So you're multi-talented! Though so... careful! Love, Jack xxx
Tor Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:40 AM
lol he will have to learn to play the drums now. lol nice write Jack
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Actually he had been playing guitar so long, he could play blindfolded! (so to speak!) Cheers, Jack
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