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A VERTICAL HIKU the form

BORN ANEW b(a ud bl oss som s) en r ewal Note: Hiku After style of ee cummings,VERTICAL form as used in the Haiga (combined art-poetry) HAIKU is the ' phonetical&cultural original 'in Japanese'& in reality uses '17 'onji' (sound symbols)rather than syllables traditionally written in Japanese ,as a single line whereas HIKU is the English language tristich(3 line) version(including translations)with similar economy of words including the THOUGHT PAUSE prompt (often indicated by an ellipsis .....the SENSE PAUSE the aesthetic point of insight flowing from perception & ONE BREATH LENGTH to correspond to the aforementioned Japanesese 17 onji sounds. The essence without "telling all" (thereby to ' show ' conforming to the key of all true imagist poetry),&avoids 'as'&'to' & the use of past tense verbs (& is often without verbs,adverbs,adjectives )A verse freed from strict syllabic constraint within its triplicity of format& is inherently enigmatic & often with a caesura and surprise ending( VERSUM )to give a 'turning' to the line.The hiku maybe a horizontal single* line,(often broken at the caesura),a vertical line(usually a painting(haiga see note) ,a couplet** or a tristich***

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Date: 1/6/2024 3:46:00 PM
I appreciate the information as well as your creation, Brian. The concept of showing and not telling is an inherent quality of all writing, but especially of poetry. I love the concise nature of Haikus. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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