A Verbal Fight

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July.14.2023

~ Placed Third~

Humorous Poems # 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Jay Narain

There used to be quarrels between the husband and wife very often. Living in a flat surrounded by neigbours, they didn't wish it to be a noisy affair. When they were angry, both being poets and fond of rhyming poetry, they decided to exchange rhyming poems abusing each other.

Wife - "Once I kept you locked in my heart But now I release you like a fart So that I can have a fresh start" Husband – "Once I disobeyed God So, He put on my back a heavy load Now I pray, take this load off my shoulder, my Lord" Wife - "Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall Like Humpty, if ever you have a great fall I will never come running at your call" Husband - "Horsey, Horsey, don’t you stop? Why blabber like an idiot nonstop? If you have no work, go and mop" Wife - "Oh! Tut...This is why I strongly say Dogs like you should be left to stray How, from men like you, I wish to stay away" Husband - "Then why linger? You may boldly walk away How I wish to rid of a 'Donkey' who can only bray" Wife – "With a man like you, do you think I will again stay? Never! But for making my life a mess you should pay"

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Mike Gentile

Date: 7/26/2023 4:18:00 AM

Valsa, A big congratulations to you xxoo

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/25/2023 4:29:00 PM

Congrats on your podium win. Well done my friend

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2023 3:58:00 PM

what a fun exchange Valsa, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2023 3:57:00 AM

Quite the verbal fight! Quiet and to the point, pointed, sharp…revenge in its wake! Great one, Valsa! You are such a talent in your varied poetry. You are one of my favorites!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/15/2023 7:10:00 AM

A fight in rhyme, now that's original, awesome work, Valsa:)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/15/2023 6:24:00 AM

You did well with this one Valsa. I had to look twice to assure my self that it was you that wrote it. ..... Its not your usual style, and it takes a talented poet, to move so far out of thier comfort zone and still write a wonderful, completely enjoyable piece. You did well