Valsa George Poet Rhyme

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July.14.2023

 

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Humorous Poems # 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Jay Narain

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There used to be quarrels between the husband and wife very often. Living in a flat surrounded by neigbours, they didn't wish it to be a noisy affair. When they were angry, both being poets and fond of rhyming poetry, they decided to exchange rhyming poems abusing each other.

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A Verbal Fight

Wife - "Once I kept you locked in my heart
But now I release you like a fart
So that I can have a fresh start"

Husband – "Once I disobeyed God
So, He put on my back a heavy load
Now I pray, take this load off my shoulder, my Lord"

Wife - "Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
Like Humpty, if ever you have a great fall
I will never come running at your call"

Husband - "Horsey, Horsey, don’t you stop?
Why blabber like an idiot nonstop?
If you have no work, go and mop"

Wife - "Oh! Tut...This is why I strongly say
Dogs like you should be left to stray
How, from men like you, I wish to stay away"

Husband - "Then why linger? You may boldly walk away
How I wish to rid of a 'Donkey' who can only bray"

Wife – "With a man like you, do you think I will again stay?
 Never! But for making my life a mess you should pay"

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Mike Gentile July 26, 2023 at 4:18 AM Valsa, A big congratulations to you xxoo

Speaks Volumes July 25, 2023 at 4:29 PM Congrats on your podium win. Well done my friend

Jan Allison July 25, 2023 at 3:58 PM what a fun exchange Valsa, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2023 at 3:57 AM Quite the verbal fight! Quiet and to the point, pointed, sharp…revenge in its wake! Great one, Valsa! You are such a talent in your varied poetry. You are one of my favorites!

Joanna Daniel July 15, 2023 at 7:10 AM A fight in rhyme, now that's original, awesome work, Valsa:)

Speaks Volumes July 15, 2023 at 6:24 AM You did well with this one Valsa. I had to look twice to assure my self that it was you that wrote it. ..... Its not your usual style, and it takes a talented poet, to move so far out of thier comfort zone and still write a wonderful, completely enjoyable piece. You did well

The Situation July 14, 2023 at 4:19 PM No happy ending hard to tell who wins. Hate to think it could get that bad. Sorry no complement.

Yann Rolland July 14, 2023 at 3:34 PM it sounds like the next divorce, enjoyed a lot the argments, this is fun to read, thanks Valsa

Jay Narain July 14, 2023 at 11:12 AM Hilarious and fun poem, Loved it.

Joseph P. DiMino July 14, 2023 at 7:12 AM :)))) Ain't that the truth! Love it! You get a Fav! Brilliant!

Vijay Pandit July 14, 2023 at 6:00 AM A fun read, Valsa.