A Vanishing Sight

On a winter evening,
along a lonely country road
I rode my bicycle and saw,
far ahead, a young couple
dressed in traditional 
ceremonial clothes. 

The setting sun cast it's light
as they crossed the wide paddy field,
brown with stubble,
quiet and still 

May be they were returning home
from a religious ceremony,
a beautiful moment
I know will never happen again
in my life 

Today, the paddy field
by the roadside is disappearing
and the road has started to buzz
with the noise of change
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 3:21 PM
This is such. Nice tribute to the memory of more pastoral times. Very descriptive
Canerdy Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 9:28 PM
Akham, this is such an expressive poem about pondering a normal, everyday scene. Janice
Calasibetta Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Lovely imagery....arouses peace and calm. Paulette
Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 7:57 PM
I can picture and even feel this lovely sight, Akham. Sweet penning! :) Gershon
DiMino Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 5:59 PM
Very peaceful, lovely imagery. A captured moment in time to treasure.
Devi Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 9:42 PM
Due to urbanisation the lonely country road becoming busy Over the paddy fields schools,shops,oil pumps dwelling houses constructed So such beautiful sights now cannot be seen there again except these remain in the memory of the poet .
Rolland Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 11:10 PM
happy sight indeed, enjoyed
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