A Valentine Wedding

It seems Cupid doesn't
have any more arrows
left in his grasp- he must
have shot me several times
after I first met you.

I find you so irresistible,
so beautiful
so sweet
so loving....

Today, I give you my love
for you in form of a ring;
a symbol of a bond
that can never be broken.

Valentines eve on a Saturday
is sure a perfect day
to marry you.



Date: 1/2/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 6, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Thank you so much Linda! *^_^*
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Nice poem, Teddy. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Thank you so much Sandra! *^_^*
Sietesantos Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic, Valentine piece that flowed sweetly from your magical pen! Congratulations, dear Teddy on a most magnificent #1 win! Pandita
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:13 AM
Greetings Pandita. Thank you for enjoying my verses, and applauding me! *^_^*
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 4:59 AM
Congrats Teddy......Nice poem.
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Thank you for enjoying my verse, Asim! ;-)
A  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Thanks so much Skat! *^_^* <3
Tagore Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Wonderful write, Teddy. Cheers, Bobby
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Thanks for your applause bobby! ;-)
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:52 PM
aww Teddy this is a lovely romantic write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Greetings buddy. Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*
Gentry Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Thank you very much Susan! *^_^*
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Teddy, congrats on your placement in the contest *smiles* -luloo
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Thank you so much Laura! *^_^*
Canerdy Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Concise and sweet, Teddy! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Thank you for your compliment, Janice! *^_^*
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