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A Valentine Romance

all the stars in the sky cannot tell you and are not meant to tell my love how much it means all the sea's can not tell you how secret or how sacred that it is that this i believe all the light from the sun cannot light the way to the secret one i give my love everyday all the love in the world for just one girl on this one particular day all the words cannot explain why i feel this way it's magically fills my heart and makes me insane all though nobody knows it continues to grows everytime i hear or see your precious name i only have one hope for Valentines Day give me your love and with you i'll stay forever and a day i promise forever and a day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/28/2011 4:13:00 PM
I am a little late reading this lovely poem. Feb was such a busy month for me that I did not have much time to go on line. phyl
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:15:00 AM
a lovely romantic poem...nice work! have a great day.... ~Shauna~
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Date: 2/19/2011 2:38:00 PM
Smile* ~ I understand my dear sweeet friend but, don't worry about it ok ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John! ~ Ps. "Thank You Trying Though;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:41:00 AM
Smile* ~ Could Your lovely Soul please tell beautiful Debra Guzzi that, I send her a Sweet Kisss upon the wings of the winds ever searching for, the Haven of her lovely hearts warming unto myselfs, You Know; "Please" ~ Also this hearts note is, "A Beautifully Brushed Soulful Painting Amid Such, 'Colourful Arrays In That, A Loves Verse" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:) ~
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:31:00 AM
Smile* ~ Hello my dear precious friend, Johnnie ~ I wish to thank you for Your sweeet com upon, "Your Beauty;" sooo tenderly whispered it seemed and, I Am glad that it brushed Your lovely heart for, "Yes," what can be more cherished and held dear unto another than, "Pure Beauty!!!" ~ Also, could you do myself a favour please for I asked precious Daver but his tender heart may possibly forget so ~ Cont:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:19:00 PM
Forever plus one day.Romantic and sweet. Good usage of rhyme. Hopeless romantic. :)
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:13:00 PM
well, gosh, I sure hope this sweet valentine melted her, john! happy belated Valentines day to you!
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:57:00 AM
a sweet valentine's special. great romantic piece. melody maker.
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:17:00 AM
forever and a day,so romantic john. .and soupmail replied :). And this gem tmfs
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Date: 2/15/2011 3:49:00 AM
Mr.Romantic
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:06:00 PM
wow! you just spiced up some secret girls heart.. wow! wow!,, hope she does not get a dito,, from you... that would hurt her feelings... i think.. nice and sweet.. take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:00:00 PM
A beautiful valentines poem, full of love~~
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Date: 2/14/2011 12:46:00 PM
John, Thanks so much for your comments on my poetry...it meant a lot!! This one is great!! You have a Wonderful Valentines Day!!!!
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:56:00 AM
A wonderful romantic poem, happy Valentine's day, love, Simone
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your special work.... you are making me wish I was more of a romanitic.
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:19:00 AM
This has got to be for some one special only they don't know about it. T. S.
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:07:00 AM
Very romantic work for that special one who holds your heart..Enjoyed reading this one on this Valentine morn..Thanks for gracing me with your presence at my work..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:36:00 AM
Your depth of love is quite evident John in your lovely lines today for that special someone.. may u always enjoy the presence of her spirit and share the intense luv still my friend ..
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:31:00 AM
I can only offer you my heart, John. You know you always have my love. I hope you can find some joy this Valentine's Day. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:05:00 AM
romance becomes you, john.. i'm flying!! so exquisitely done! :) huggs, nette
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